Over a year had passed since Shining first became a cuckold alongside Sombra and Cadance. But even with how extreme the three have been taking their relationship, Sombra was curious about testing how far Shining was willing to go as his "Private"...
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Wow, the person who came up with this story really hates shining armor, huh?
Lol that was funny.
9959045
No problem. Love the series so far!
Great chapter! I think the build-up to his official gelding was handled brilliantly, with the light teasing and snickering from the other ponies and Shining's proclamation of his new cuck status in front of everyone, and the feeling of acceptance he experienced.
I was hoping that Sombre might make his transition from prince to pet complete by forcing him to polish his balls in front of everyone or claim him fully. But it was still a whole bunch of fun to read.
I think it's kind of lame that we ended up going with the "it was all a dream" ending. I would have at least liked an extra chapter between Shining's gelding and the ending to see what his new life as the lowest being in the court might be like! So much potential! The embarrassment of having to walk around the halls with a little scar where his balls used to be, and how it might feel to finally be allowed to join the couple in bed, but not as a stallion but a limp sex thing. Oh well, maybe another story!
"I had a dream, you were there, you, and you too" Sort of ruin my fun of Shining regretting it later down the road, but ultimately for the best for him and the story. I think the chapter was great in showing the overwhelming horrifying realty of what Shining was about to do himself and that the at he at least lived his fantasy long enough to realize that it was all crazy of him to go though it. I wonder if this was a spell or that his subconscious was trying to get that desire out of system before it is too late. Hopefully this will trike enough insecurity for Shining to reverse everything he did in the past year.
Very interesting...what will this mean for Shining? His own subconscious has now clearly shown that he wants this, yet he also has suffered the loss of his cage...Hmmmm, what will the next day bring?
9960537
Hmm, yes.
Fetus Deletus
9973286
Nah, that was the name of the spell Harry Potter used when he accidentally impregnated Draco. 😆
9973326
lol wut?😆
I like the idea of the dream sequence maybe allowing to bring in more people and to allow the author to explore the exposure without straying from the limits posed by the security and safety of the characters
only thing i think that would have made this better is if during the gelding Twilight was under him for the sperm sample teasing him to climax, and if Cadance and Sombra each took a testicle each at the moment of orgasm and redid their vows exchanging testicles like rings maybe as pendents, so Shining will always be part of the marriage
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You do realize that this story is not marked complete right?
9999660
I wasn't. Can't wait to see what's next!