Real Talk
Hey Everyone this is Sanguine Blade. SO I got to explain some things. Before you start shouting "Where's H44?!" I must explain life has made things more difficult in regards to upload. First, I've arrived at college so that slows things down. Secodly, Ive been suffering a problem. See I'm reaching the end of my capabilities as a one man team. I have no others helping me with the stories and last time I wrote a blog requesting help noone answered. If you would like to help let me know. Third I need to know if you guys still want the series to go on and that requires more feedback then "Good Chapter" which gives me motivation, but doesn't explain what was good about it so please throw in your two cents(don't be a bastitch though). The current chapter Call of the Lords is in the infant stages. SO please read this and please respond.
Thank you,
Saguine
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I really like this series but I have no idea what makes me like it and have no suggestions for you to make it better.
Sorry.
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Do you want it to continue yes or no?
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yes, definitely yes.
I enjoy the story. I like the concept of a ship or other ensouled self propelled vehicle being transported to equestria.
I personally am not a fan of anthropomorphic but that is just me and doesn't really detract from the story.
As for ideas for the story. I think the pirates, seeing this new threat to their empire or more specifically, pocket books, should try to eliminate the germania. Perhaps while the captain is in canterlot. This would highlight a security leak. I also believe that realizing that they dont have the firepower to stand up to the germania they will employ more covert tactics such as sabotage, explosives, ect.
I would also make use of the secondary armaments as well. More so then the main guns when dealing with wood hulled vessels because the main cannons would be far less effective against something that offers so little resistance. Smaller caliber cannons firing high explosive or incendiary would be much more effective againced the pirate ships, save the main armorment for taking out pirate ports and forts.
Oh and dont be afraid to get physical. Ramming is a valid naval tactic.
I want it to continue
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I also like the concept of ensouled vehicles, do you have any suggestions, the only ones I can find are this one and a truck one that was canceled.
Also, to Sanguine, I would be more than happy to help out. I am very analytical and would make a great editor. I know a lot of the rules of the written language, but sadly I have not put myself out there yet, though I hope this is just a first step. PM me for more info.
I would like you to continue this
I honestly dont know why i love this story. Maybe because i love the idea af human technology in Equestria.
But i want you to continue this story.
Continue please i love storys i this one
Sanguina Blade
Would it be funny if you crossover world of tanks or warships and my little pony world, imagine the looks on inhabitants on players killing each other, appearing out of nowhere and vanish without a trace. Btw, continue the story, with regards fortress.
P.s if you are fingering out for a name of world of tanks crossover, i suggest: the antics of the world of tanks players. Also, read world of tanks by cellum95 here at fimfiction. There is even a warthunder squel but sadly he stopped updating the story. Its was getting to the good part.
If i'm going to continue I need a team since I do best as the big picture so I need someone who could help with details in these stories.
This story somehow sliped under my radar.
I love this story
I would really love for this to continue. And I agree with vustrunreyth on much of what he said. If you are looking for the big picture like you said but can't find someone to help, the comments are always a good place to start. This story is currently docked at my main bookshelf and I really do hope you continue.
Huh second most recent chapter posted today. The most recent on the 8th of this month
Just found this story and I’m enjoying it. Can’t wait for more
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Same
You need to slow down a bit, but you have a good character and a good world, now we just need longer talks between people. And some life add to the world , maybe talk about some of the sea creatures he sees as he travels to add some words. It builds the world and shows wonder.