This story takes place after Twilight became a princess but "Magic Duel" never happened so please don't yell at me for not including it.
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That would be a great idea and a great way to mix things up a bit more.
Nice. Good to see Twilight cut Trixie off after she said plaything and reassure her that while she might enjoy emphasizing her ownership over Trixie, she also values her as a pony in her own right. As for the citrusy elements of the chapter, the resulting rumors certainly aren't going to help dispel the suggestion that Trixie is a corrupting influence. Also, even if it's not exactly an original idea, the whole Trixie sucking Twilight while she sat in her throne and held court strongly reminded me of another story, one that had a chapter where Twilight was doing exactly the same thing Trixie was in this chapter. Oh, and if you still want to work the fact that Trixie was thinking about killing herself into the story, it shouldn't be to hard to find a way to work it in a few chapters down the road. Starlight has already suggested there may be problems with the rest of the mane six, Twilight having a fight with one of the three who challenged her might make Trixie think about that challenge and all the bad things that came after that, an when Twilight comforts her distressed pet, it all comes out. Or perhaps a show pony or theater manager, one who refused to help Trixie get her act back on it's feet after she lost everything, comes and petitions Twilight for the right to perform or set up a theater in Ponyville, and seeing them again brings back those same memories.
S&M isn't my thing, so I'm not going to read yours, but wasn't that other one the one where twilight accidentally brainwashes trixie into a legit slave, and herself into a giant douchebag? Not magically, I mean. Then their friends notice and have an intervention?
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I may end up doing that now, but I wont have to put the Suicide tag back, will I? I kind of need The Alternate Universe tag, and I can't add another tag or else the story says to many tags
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Yes, but I said inspired. Not a copy of
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Since it's not a major element of the story, I'd say just stick with the AU tag, and if you want you could always mention that there will be a scene discussing past suicidal thoughts at the end of the description.
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Thanks for the input! The cleared it up for me
9455110
What was the story that it reminded you of
9455876
After That Fateful Night.
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thank you rooks
Great story so far. Cant wait for more
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for what?
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for the telling me the story
Im starting to hate dignitary ponies as much as the snotty nobles in canterlot
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Good. They suck. Also I look forward to more comments from you
I can imagine the trixie from my au being like: fuck this shit im out