Putting author's notes here now. Also blocks the whole 'First' post crap too.
Anyway, yes, another short chapter. What Ev's, obviously a battle next chapter. Also "Le Gasp!" Spitfire was the assassin!? Obviously somethings going on there, but good on her for recognizing that Celestia isn't Celestia anymore. Wonder how G is gonna take the news? Another thing, yes, I'm re introducing wonderful musical references and stuff, cause I love it.
Also shame on Twilight, she must be eating a lot due to stress.
Ill just say that anything with "Solar Empire vs Lunar Republic" should by default be alternate universe since none of that exists in the material (the show).
1638617 This actually takes place roughly 4-6 years after the original season premiere and the cleansing of Nightmare Moon by the mane six.
Everything they've done hasn't changed a bit. Same universe, just in the future. In fact I'm debating bringing in the crystal ponies too. As for the war, it was never explained well in the show.
1638639 That moment when you realize that "you killed your love interests adopted daughter, then they died to save said adopted daughter, then four months later said adopted daughter kicks the ass of your leader and pulls knives on you". Ahhhhh, nothing like it in the world lol.
There never even was a mention of any war in the show, just that one sister refused to lower the moon and the other stopped her.
And if its not alternate universe how is Celestia the evil one? 1000 and something years of hiding it would suck, especially when you already had your sister banished and total control, AND time to do whatever you want with them, easily ensure they hate Luna and never listen to her, let alone rebel with her against you.
1639372 Which leads me to the thought that you didn't read the story, did you?
Obviously not, for it is explained that Celestia was possessed by Nightmare, a creature that will later be explained in better detail, but for the moment so I don't ruin the story will be put as thus. Took over Luna when she thought that Telvanni, her adopted son, died, then took over Celestia, preying on her fears and worries as well as lingering dislike for Telvanni.
And it never said there wasn't a war either.
Do not presume you have precedence to judge one properly if you have not read their story to the fullest.
1639407 Nah i didnt read it, i rarely read a NLR vs Solar Empire, .
And the history mentions a conflict between them, but from the way it was told it was 1 on 1, but if it does not mention a war you should assume there was none, usually if something is not mentioned in "history" it was either insignificant or didn't happen, and wars are quiet significant. (yeah its a kids show, doubt they would mention it , but that just limits us in claiming something is oficial, we can think what we want but that doesnt make it oficial)
But in the end feel free to delete all my comment,anything i say is most likely moot without me reading the story, and i just dont plan to do that. When i sum it up i see : Carnivour like creature on pony romance, best guess is its Luna, the wolf-guy's probably lmmortal since he lived during the first time NNM appeared( or whatever the explanation is?) and still does, bet he has super strenght or speed or something (frist thing i would associate a wolf like creature with ).
But im mostly put off by it being NLR vs SE, it did look interesting until i came to that part, althought by your explanation of things you just took the names of the "factions" because of its common use (althought mostly in AU fics) , and would guess the "Republic" is a republic by name only, still lead by Princess Luna as a monarch (having the title of princess even in the description)
1639844 Telvanni, the main character, is a Lycan, the predescesor to Diamond Dogs, the "fiction", because thats what this site is for, fiction, is about Telvanni being struck by the Elements of Harmony during Luna and Celestia's struggle. As a result he winds up in the future and meets Twilight.
Relvanni is omnivorous, and rather than focus on NLR vs SE it's more about the characters, primarily Telvanni Twilight Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, and how they live and cope with the war.
Celestia is possessed by the same creature, Nightmare, that possessed Luna and the hope is to save Celestia.
You will also find that I don't mention the Empire or the Republic exclusively and focus more on the characters.
One more thing, you didn't downvote on presumption did you? Cause if you did that is extremely unfair because you don't know whether its actually a good fiction or not.
Finally I just had a thought pop into my head and I really hope that it does not happen, cause if it does then I don't know if i will be able to carry on with the story
Putting author's notes here now. Also blocks the whole 'First' post crap too.
Anyway, yes, another short chapter. What Ev's, obviously a battle next chapter.
Also "Le Gasp!" Spitfire was the assassin!? Obviously somethings going on there, but good on her for recognizing that Celestia isn't Celestia anymore. Wonder how G is gonna take the news?
Another thing, yes, I'm re introducing wonderful musical references and stuff, cause I love it.
Also shame on Twilight, she must be eating a lot due to stress.
Can't wait to see the lovely comments!
Now I must go prepare for war!
TO WAR!
Ill just say that anything with "Solar Empire vs Lunar Republic" should by default be alternate universe since none of that exists in the material (the show).
k,thx bye now
WOOHOOO!!!
update.
And DAYUM what a twist.
Love the chapter and GLORIOUS BATTLES AWAIT!!!!!
1638617 This actually takes place roughly 4-6 years after the original season premiere and the cleansing of Nightmare Moon by the mane six.
Everything they've done hasn't changed a bit. Same universe, just in the future. In fact I'm debating bringing in the crystal ponies too.
As for the war, it was never explained well in the show.
1638639 That moment when you realize that "you killed your love interests adopted daughter, then they died to save said adopted daughter, then four months later said adopted daughter kicks the ass of your leader and pulls knives on you". Ahhhhh, nothing like it in the world lol.
1639330
There never even was a mention of any war in the show, just that one sister refused to lower the moon and the other stopped her.
And if its not alternate universe how is Celestia the evil one? 1000 and something years of hiding it would suck, especially when you already had your sister banished and total control, AND time to do whatever you want with them, easily ensure they hate Luna and never listen to her, let alone rebel with her against you.
1639372 Which leads me to the thought that you didn't read the story, did you?
Obviously not, for it is explained that Celestia was possessed by Nightmare, a creature that will later be explained in better detail, but for the moment so I don't ruin the story will be put as thus. Took over Luna when she thought that Telvanni, her adopted son, died, then took over Celestia, preying on her fears and worries as well as lingering dislike for Telvanni.
And it never said there wasn't a war either.
Do not presume you have precedence to judge one properly if you have not read their story to the fullest.
1639407
Nah i didnt read it, i rarely read a NLR vs Solar Empire, .
And the history mentions a conflict between them, but from the way it was told it was 1 on 1, but if it does not mention a war you should assume there was none, usually if something is not mentioned in "history" it was either insignificant or didn't happen, and wars are quiet significant. (yeah its a kids show, doubt they would mention it , but that just limits us in claiming something is oficial, we can think what we want but that doesnt make it oficial)
But in the end feel free to delete all my comment,anything i say is most likely moot without me reading the story, and i just dont plan to do that. When i sum it up i see : Carnivour like creature on pony romance, best guess is its Luna, the wolf-guy's probably lmmortal since he lived during the first time NNM appeared( or whatever the explanation is?) and still does, bet he has super strenght or speed or something (frist thing i would associate a wolf like creature with ).
But im mostly put off by it being NLR vs SE, it did look interesting until i came to that part, althought by your explanation of things you just took the names of the "factions" because of its common use (althought mostly in AU fics) , and would guess the "Republic" is a republic by name only, still lead by Princess Luna as a monarch (having the title of princess even in the description)
Good luck with the fic and all regardless.
1639844 Telvanni, the main character, is a Lycan, the predescesor to Diamond Dogs, the "fiction", because thats what this site is for, fiction, is about Telvanni being struck by the Elements of Harmony during Luna and Celestia's struggle.
As a result he winds up in the future and meets Twilight.
Relvanni is omnivorous, and rather than focus on NLR vs SE it's more about the characters, primarily Telvanni Twilight Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, and how they live and cope with the war.
Celestia is possessed by the same creature, Nightmare, that possessed Luna and the hope is to save Celestia.
You will also find that I don't mention the Empire or the Republic exclusively and focus more on the characters.
One more thing, you didn't downvote on presumption did you? Cause if you did that is extremely unfair because you don't know whether its actually a good fiction or not.
1640058
I dont vote on stories i dont read.
1640072 That's nice to hear. I've had that happen before....on numerous stories, primarily any that portray Dash as straight or my HiE fic
TO WAR!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter to happen
Finally I just had a thought pop into my head and I really hope that it does not happen, cause if it does then I don't know if i will be able to carry on with the story
1642464 Why is war something that you'd be worried about? Like, could you explain, cause I'd hate to lose a reader
1645286 war i can handle my concern is if Twilight gets captured by Celestia and she tries to get rid of Twilights unborn kid
1645552 Who said anything about an unborn kid?! Eh eff it, who am I kidding
No, that won't happen.
This is essentially the start of the actual conflict of the story.
1647402 Last chapter, when Dash brought her in, remember? Or if you aren't caught up yet, read the latest chapter!
Ahhh, that answers my question...
1647497 Tis all making sense now lol