Sir, your story is a derp. I liked it near the start and then it went downhill from there. The most pressing issue is that at one point you stopped calling the lycan a he and actually called it a she and a her. Is it a boy or girl? Make up your mind!
1116128 If they do, I will find them, and I will kill them. Anyway I hope you'll still be on in about 15 to 20 minutes because I'll be putting chapter dos up soon.
Very good! Although not original! Check out Agies Shield's Twilight and the Spartan Stallion.
Sir, your story is a derp. I liked it near the start and then it went downhill from there. The most pressing issue is that at one point you stopped calling the lycan a he and actually called it a she and a her. Is it a boy or girl? Make up your mind!
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i like stories like these cause they always make me smile and stuff cause they are soo awsome
except for 'Twilight' cause that film sucks
oh and "still a better love story than 'Twilight'"
it's ironic. Twilight is in a better love story than 'Twilight'
1115302 You just scored my first laugh of the day. Congradulations!
1115481 i just bet some1 is going to say that 'Twilight' is a good film. just wait.
i dare them
1116128 If they do, I will find them, and I will kill them. Anyway I hope you'll still be on in about 15 to 20 minutes because I'll be putting chapter dos up soon.
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excellent
1116156 Meep
1116162 i think i went to far that time
now i look back at it. it makes me look perhaps a bit to much of a stalker.
but who cares it was worth it!!!!!
it's Rainbow Dash, not Rainbowdash (i've made this mistake before )
I frikkin LOVE this story!