1935943 Why? I mean, it isn't too sad, I just didn't know what else to label it. You'll get why I called this the sad ending after seeing the next two I'm sure.
1935958 Well I played with killing off either Twi or Telv, as well as also playing with a grim dark where Celestia kills Scootaloo before everponies eyes, then beats down and kills Telvanni before killing off the rest of the Night Corps. and her sister. She then would have locked Twilight in a tower, made the mare watch her friends(the elements) be executed by hanging, then throwing the 'parasite'(Twilight's baby) off the balcony to its death.
Twilight then would have commited suicide, and Celestia would have gone mad and treated Twilights body like it was still the mare.
In the end though, I couldn't go through with it. I just couldn't get my head around what a waste of time that ending makes the entire story, as well as the fact that I can't stand most grimdarks.
Instead I basically settled for the 'Sad' ending where Trixie and Celestia die, then a 'Realistic Ending' of what would probably happen in a more realistic scenario, and the 'Happy ending' where everypony wins!
1935991 I might, but I want to get my main three out first. Also, being honest, I have a hard time doing anything that breaks up families. Being a guy who grew up in a rough household with broken family, I kind of have a thing against portraying them. Writing chapter four, 'The Filly Angel', was probably the most trying and hardest chapter I've ever had to write, just do to the emotional level of it, so I highly doubt I could do anything worse than what I did with Trixie and Celestia without having some sort of breakdown.
if this is the sad one I wonder how happy the other will be.
1935943 Why? I mean, it isn't too sad, I just didn't know what else to label it. You'll get why I called this the sad ending after seeing the next two I'm sure.
ok well I was expecting either telvanni or twilight to die it may also have to do with the fact that I don't really like celestia and I HATE trixie
1935958 Well I played with killing off either Twi or Telv, as well as also playing with a grim dark where Celestia kills Scootaloo before everponies eyes, then beats down and kills Telvanni before killing off the rest of the Night Corps. and her sister. She then would have locked Twilight in a tower, made the mare watch her friends(the elements) be executed by hanging, then throwing the 'parasite'(Twilight's baby) off the balcony to its death.
Twilight then would have commited suicide, and Celestia would have gone mad and treated Twilights body like it was still the mare.
In the end though, I couldn't go through with it. I just couldn't get my head around what a waste of time that ending makes the entire story, as well as the fact that I can't stand most grimdarks.
Instead I basically settled for the 'Sad' ending where Trixie and Celestia die, then a 'Realistic Ending' of what would probably happen in a more realistic scenario, and the 'Happy ending' where everypony wins!
1935976 ok that's a little to sad
1935991 I might, but I want to get my main three out first.
Also, being honest, I have a hard time doing anything that breaks up families. Being a guy who grew up in a rough household with broken family, I kind of have a thing against portraying them. Writing chapter four, 'The Filly Angel', was probably the most trying and hardest chapter I've ever had to write, just do to the emotional level of it, so I highly doubt I could do anything worse than what I did with Trixie and Celestia without having some sort of breakdown.
1935997ok
The only good celestia is a dead celestia. *braces self for army of bronies*