And of course the inevitable 'downvote with no ryhm nor reason to why the buck said reader didn't like it' that I knew was going to happen

People need to read full descriptions....

1069670 The first chapter had that problem, yes?
A little over halfway through I fully swapped the gender of Telvanni for romance reasons and seemed to not have fixed all the issues. Mind helping me out on where I messed that up?
And actually, if you could help me understand where I made the story start going downhill in your opinion so I could possibly fix it?

1069665 Really?

Darn, there goes my thunder. Oh well.

1069307
Please continue!

1069752 I plan on it, I just wish Train would toss me a reply so I can see what I can do as far as improvements go.

Sounds interesting,<Shameless Advertising> I'll read it once I'm done writing chapter 6 for my story 'The Wolf'

1116388 Shameless advertising is shameless! I'll give it a look though....

Well is this story mature cause if it is
just before you begin the clop part insert a warning for the clop then write it out
or you could just link it to 'the clop files'
either way is good but which is easier for you.
personally i think you should go with the 'clop files' idea as we can ignore it to skip it and you don't have to re publish the chapter

1116395 I just put 'clop' in parentheses before the name of the chapter

1116395 Makes sense. I'll ge to work on it.

1116402 i was totally gonna say something that suggested that i was a sex addict but thought better of it
so instead i will settle for "k"

1116402 ah screw it
yay more clop for me!!!!!!!! ahahahahahahahahaha

1116451 Of course

1116456
i'm definitely gonna be labelled as a sex addict now
and it's all your fault
they're probably gonna lock me in some padded cell in the middle of greenland and feed me clop magazines and what i would hope to be water.
and when i finally make my escape they will lure me away with pony plushies
he he life size celestia plushie

1116491 And when you reach the end of the line there will be a big wolf plushie holding a Twilight Plushie and it will be d'awesome. Right now I'm watching Bronydance party work on a livestream for awoken pmv but I'll get on that clop for ya her in a bit. hahaha.

postzzzz zeee liiinnnkkkk

1116509 Telvanni's got a longer tongue......jus' sayin'

got the livestream nvnd 1116520

That makeout scene (between pinkie and dash) would've been better with Dash and Shy =P, I'm a guy, I'm fine with ALMOST everything else. (this is fine by me )

1118020 I did Pinkie and Dash for the innuendo joke for the party hahaha.

The clop page doesn't exist anymore... :/

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