I enjoyed the chapter, but it makes Celestia and Luna out to be downright evil. They're torturing Anon to make him solve the problems they won't in exchange for letting him marry the mare he loves. That's just evil.
Going to agree with this. This is a bit beyond the 'silly porn story' that this piece was referred to when making the Crown who would - out of sheer respect for life - rather reform than kill one of their greatest enemies out to be essentially the antagonists. Making the audience feel more supportive of the mass-murdering megalomaniac in opposition to them. Not sure how I feel about that. I'll see where it goes.
Like a ship snapping in two as it sinks, Umbra’s will finally gave way. Tears rolled down her cheeks and whines of loss crept out of her throat. A high pitched whimper stopped Anon’s furthering grip, finally earning Umbra at least some reprieve. She gasped for breath and coughed raggedly, all the while curling her legs in tight against her barrel.
I don't understand why he wants a piece of paper saying he is getting married so much at the level of accepting a inmate in his house that can easily murder them in their sleep.
Also, most countries today give some kind of citizenship if you marry one of the citizens, not having that in Equestria shows how much backwards they are, especially them invalidating any interspecies marriage, including between gryphon and ponies, dragons, yaks, diamond dogs and stuff. The princesses are real bastards and it surprises me the princess of love didn't say anything.
Also, medieval times don't have "citizens" they have lieges, vassals and commoners. A commoner is simply expected to serve the nobility, which is usually easily accomplished by providing tithe. The idea of Citizen is something that only happens in the enlightment with the idea of rights and duties.
Equestria has nobility and the only form of democracy seems to be mayors (which is also how it usually happened in medieval times) that are put by vote, so Celestia and Luna are either concealling those facts purposely or they are even more backwards than I thought, each are equally bad and just make them the villain really. (Yes I know there are spelling errors, using a phone to type is horrible and stuff)
Really well written and thought out chapter.
Huh. Guess she just needed a spanking. Go figure.
It is looking good. It is nice to have some plot to go with the clop in this, so I will follow you around.
I really like this story. Good shit, ty!
Predator fetish
This will never get old.
Huh, nothing like potentially life altering injuries to start off your day right!
Also, damn the princesses are manipulative, that's pretty nasty.
I enjoyed the chapter, but it makes Celestia and Luna out to be downright evil. They're torturing Anon to make him solve the problems they won't in exchange for letting him marry the mare he loves. That's just evil.
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Going to agree with this. This is a bit beyond the 'silly porn story' that this piece was referred to when making the Crown who would - out of sheer respect for life - rather reform than kill one of their greatest enemies out to be essentially the antagonists. Making the audience feel more supportive of the mass-murdering megalomaniac in opposition to them. Not sure how I feel about that. I'll see where it goes.
This is getting more and more interesting.
I don't understand why he wants a piece of paper saying he is getting married so much at the level of accepting a inmate in his house that can easily murder them in their sleep.
Also, most countries today give some kind of citizenship if you marry one of the citizens, not having that in Equestria shows how much backwards they are, especially them invalidating any interspecies marriage, including between gryphon and ponies, dragons, yaks, diamond dogs and stuff. The princesses are real bastards and it surprises me the princess of love didn't say anything.
Also, medieval times don't have "citizens" they have lieges, vassals and commoners. A commoner is simply expected to serve the nobility, which is usually easily accomplished by providing tithe. The idea of Citizen is something that only happens in the enlightment with the idea of rights and duties.
Equestria has nobility and the only form of democracy seems to be mayors (which is also how it usually happened in medieval times) that are put by vote, so Celestia and Luna are either concealling those facts purposely or they are even more backwards than I thought, each are equally bad and just make them the villain really. (Yes I know there are spelling errors, using a phone to type is horrible and stuff)
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Unfortunately my major was in CNC machining. So most of that failed to dawn on me.