Umbra, Derpy, and Anon in a story together... I would never have thought of it, but you made it not only work but seem entirely sensible in the universe. So far it's ton of fun, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
9420410 I have no set schedule for uploading chapters. I will just be putting them up soon as I've finished and edited then. At this moment I'm about 3/4 through chapter 2.
Umbra hissed, finding that the mental barrier put up by her target’s sheer ignorance thwarted her far better than any magical ward.
this reminds me of a quote i saw which was something along the lines of: "No amount of professional planning or skill can compare to the sheer luck of a dumbass." (Not trying to hate on derpy, i just find it funny that her obliviousness is her savior XD)
Finally, all those years of waiting
i can finally upvote an r64 umbra plus a human
like!
Can't wait for more of this my friend.
Seems very interesting and good so far. How long to you plan to make it?
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Roughly 6-7 chapters. But I can't be certain at this stage. I rarely plan more than 1 or 2 chapters ahead. Thanks for the interest.
Umbra, Derpy, and Anon in a story together... I would never have thought of it, but you made it not only work but seem entirely sensible in the universe. So far it's ton of fun, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
When is this going to update?
Pls tell me
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I have no set schedule for uploading chapters. I will just be putting them up soon as I've finished and edited then. At this moment I'm about 3/4 through chapter 2.
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YAY!
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So is Umbr a pony or anthro But so far good story
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All ponies in the story are feral, rather than anthro.
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So ponies OK because when I read the story you made it sound like umbra was anthro
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What a fool I was.
Cookie cutter
Heh, I like how you have poor Umbra gaining weight. Hope it keeps coming up in future chapters.
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Just because it is, doesn't mean it would be bad.
Looks like she wants in the herd bad.
this reminds me of a quote i saw which was something along the lines of:
"No amount of professional planning or skill can compare to the sheer luck of a dumbass." (Not trying to hate on derpy, i just find it funny that her obliviousness is her savior XD)