When over 6800 humans in 12 teams play paintball using restored and/or recreated weapons of war for the entertainment of the masses find their way into Equestria with their equipment. chaos shall ensue
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pony terrorists fuck celestia is going to be pissed
I'm guessing griffins.
9775174
No shit dude, and they're gunning for the humans too.
Seems like these unnamed assailants have a crude missile based anti aircraft weapon.
9775798
We shall see.
9775590
You guessed correct, the same griffons from a few chapters ago, 'ovature for...' i think it was either disaster or tragity
9775174
They are actually griffons, but their job leads to the same effect
Thank you all for commenting!
I love these interations with you awesome people who have the patience to read my mediocre scribblings xD
It took me far too long but ive discivered grammarly. So no more spelling errors or missplaced grammar.
Pulls out of an inverted flat spin in a b-17... seems legit, I mean the b-17 is a beast and they did have to deal with spin at high altitudes if they had to counter spin without rudder control they would use variable thrust between the left and right engines since the engines could offer more yaw control than just the rudder alone. If the b-17 comes out intact or even makes a return you should use the damage to it as a reason to for the ground crew to convert it into an XB-39 that has a top speed of about 404mph compared to the 287mph that the original powerplants could put out.
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Oooooohhh! Thats actually a very good idea!
Thanks for mentioning that!p odd bird!
So, how are you liking the story so far? Care to give a review if its not too much of a bother?
Thanks!
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Yeah it is an odd bird, boeing only built one under contract with the army air corps. I am greatly enjoying the story. I made a mistake I meant the XB-38 the XB-38 is built off a B-17 while the XB-39 is built off the B-29, the XB-38 has a top speed of about 327mph I don't think that the B-17 airframe could handle the stress from 404mph without hitting its limits. I would be worried about the wings shearing off.
Also I have been away from the site for a bit due to school, I just finished catching up on the story really enjoying it.
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Thanks!
And i dont think they have to worry about the wings shearing off... whats left of them anyway...
I wanna see somone make a really cartoonie bighead style fanart of those two flying half a b17 xD
Itd be incredible!
And good luck on your schooling mate!
I've got good news, but first the bad!
D.E's going on a temporary...Holiday... I'm reluctant to use the "H" word, cause I know people tend to panic around it. So here's the long story short on whats going on with D.E and why it's taking so long to get this latest update out.
Bad news.
-D.E's going on 'Holiday'
-Oh Noes! we're out of buffer updates!
Good news!
-I'm finally going to work my way from start to end of the current D.E story and fix ALL of those Bloody Grammar and spelling issues... *Shivers*
-The second reason why D.E's going on holiday is that my friend has found someone who wants to turn it into a series on youtube! Yay!
-Sorta good bad news. This requires me to go through and fix all the issues, and I figure its also a chance to stop the train and check for damage and wear. so to speak... (Also, I'm going to essentially rewrite D.E. Don't panic though! I'll keep the original untouched in case you guys don't like the new one... The revised chapters will have the designation "Re/". The reason for the Re-write is because I realize I've dug myself quite a few plot holes and I 'made a naughty'. That being I started before I was finished planning... *Eh-heh...* ... )
-- Next point! - The rewritten edition of D.E Is going to be far more in-depth and focus on the main characters rather than the story at large.
As that is somthing I've made the mistake of... Too many characters. Not enough character-building... that and the story doesn't flow...unless we're talking like a white water river... so to make a long story short: D.E is going on holiday, this is to fix all the errors made in the story, Whilst it's on holiday, and I'm on holiday. (I'm going to Echuca this summer) I'll be working through the 40*C days to write a buffer of new chapters for D.E And the RE/ Versions of each chapter. The RE versions will expand upon the story of each chapter and will thus be longer and more fleshed out.
So in conclusion.
-D.E's not dead! I'll die before I let that happen!
-D.E's going to be fixed! No more plot holes. An actual writing rules system. (mostly an in-depth description of in-story events and systems EG Magic)
-Even though I'm rewriting the already existing chapters. The originals shan't be lost! The rewritten ones will have the designation RE/ at the start of the chapter names. And I will continue to post updates for the standard D.E chapters. (The way I'm working this out in my head is, As originally planned. D.E will cover the events of the world the story takes place in. So it will still be spontaneous and shocking. But as D.E currently is, it will be...sorta like an abridged version... like a storyline dictionary that's fun to read.
-D.E/RE are the rewritten chapters. They are the same as their normal counterparts. however, they're far more detailed and focus mostly on building the story and the characters in it. So think of these chapters as the story propper, the actual "novel" itself.
Really loving this story and I can’t wait to see more soon!
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Thanks!
Glad to hear it!
Im having fun writing it. I just feel as though D.E could be more, yet everyone says they like it. I know i missed quite a few events and brushed over others... thus the RE/ edition. I wont miss the details my friends!
Is there anything i can improve on? Im honestly stuck in a self critiqueing tailspin. We all go there eventually i guess but what do you guys as the readers think?
9894985 Honestly I don’t have an crit right now however your welcome to upload those other ones too and we can see what we are missing.
9895404
Thanks.
I'll post the next chapter alongside the first RE/.
9898369 Sweet cant wait to see what’s in store for them!
Actually I thinZk there are griffins not ponies but okay and I would have to question
9933946
Yessir. They are indeed griffons. The sabotours that is
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B-17s were tough as nails! Wonder what's going to happen when they discover what happened...
Any chance of a new chapter?
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It's coming, i've already half written it, and it has been half written for a month. I've just got D.E paused for a bit whilst i do some much needed planning and character...logging? Building? Fleshing out? Documenting?- well logging and documenting are technically the same thing.
Rest assured. I want to continue writing D.E as well, i just need some time to build characters and plan ahead. Anyones welcome to join by the way, if you want in on D.E's planning just PM me and i'll send you the link to our discord.
Update:
I have completed the character sheets for most of the main cast, and are currently working on some art to add into the story for readers reference.
Next chapter is almost done, and the first 6th of the first D.e/RE chapter is done.
Soon we shall be back!
I look forward to it
I'm also working on a project that, if approved by the staff, will be the first of its kind on fimfiction!
Can't wait to see your reactions!
As it stands. Taking a step back and looking at the time its taking to do all of this, my super secret project is looking to be ready before D.E will be... but at least it'll give you guys somthing to read whilst i fix my own mistakes with D.E...
Have fun and stay safe mates!
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is good but it's been awhile since i read through the story fully.
also manually translated.
Damn, they survived. Nice. Now time to hunt down those fuckers who did it. Can't wait for the next chapter
10566134
I have a feeling I hit right on the money. Aslo, ETA on next chapter?
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I know you probably get asked this a lot but when is the next chapter?
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I'm currently working on my buffer chapters. And at the same time correcting all my horrific spelling and gramatical errors in existing chapters.
And makjng quite a few special surprises for each chapter to thank you all for being so patient
10566135
I'm currently working of fixing the terrible display of spelling and grammar I've made in previous chapters. Making buffer chapters. And making surprises for ALL chapters as a thank you for being patient.
Will be uploading again soon
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Ah, well at least there's something. Its always good to proofread earlier chapters. I'm just glad to hear that this story isn't dead. It's really amazing and I truly want more.
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Thanks for replying.
OK I'm glad I'm wrong. Still, fuckin pony terrorists