When over 6800 humans in 12 teams play paintball using restored and/or recreated weapons of war for the entertainment of the masses find their way into Equestria with their equipment. chaos shall ensue
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Mad Max in a world a technicoloured ponies and with tanks and armoured cars....Hmmmmm ;)
... Who is this memetic Blueblood level character, and why does he share Shining Armour's name?
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Shining armour isnt too pleased about helping the humans after what theyve done. But he cant fault them for their reactions either.
So hes.caught in BlueBlood level 'aggrivated by everything(ness)'
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Yet Shining Armour was willing to forgive the changelings who crashed his wedding, invaded his capital, nearly starved his wife-to-be and mind controlled him. I'm having a lot of trouble reconciling that Shining Armour with this one, who seems to exist solely to generate pity for the humans and buff up the night guard characters as the moral paragons.
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Shinings time will come...
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Also. The changelings didnt level towns and indescriminantly attack everypony.
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Did you watch A Royal Wedding? That's exactly what the Changelings were doing.
I have to agree with Keroko on this one; Shining Armor is rather out of character in this situation. I also have to question why Celestia would allow the Solar Guard (and her citizenry) to harass the humans for as long and as much as they have, even after it was made full public knowledge to the populace at large that the human's reactions were A) fully at fault of the ponies themselves, and B) not under their control, owing to the possession the shadow creatures were harming them with. It seems like a massive failure of governance to not only not offer and make reparations for such a screwup, but to follow it up with harassment that could likely instigate another conflict. There's also a few parts where I had to cringe once the ponies (especially Luna) started to play the Pain Olympics, trying to one-up the humans in various ways over how they were hurt too, when they were the ones who started this whole mess in the first place.
As was mentioned earlier, a large portion of this group are still practically kids (18-20 year olds) who had their entire lives ripped from them when they were only expecting to have a, what? Six month paintball tournament to go through? That kind of stress is easily enough to snap most young adults like that. Also: we still don't know what the hell kind of paintball game/tournament/league we're dealing with that has its players use full on restored WW1-2 vehicles, to include aircraft!
There's doesn't seem to be anything that mentions the Princess's desire to build relations with the group again, nor do we know what happened to Jackie and her new people. I can only imagine those might be addressed in a later chapter, but this doesn't seem to indicate that anyone even remembers or knows either of those things were, well, things. If Celestia doesn't step up soon, she won't be able to repair any relations at all, and would potentially have another hostile force at Equestria's neck down the line, one that's proven exactly how deadly it is, at the expense of a good portion of her ponies lives. That's a hard price to pay for that level of knowledge, and one she shouldn't be looking to pay again for a second bout of negligence.
DESPITE ALL OF THAT, I've been enjoying this tale you've been weaving (even though all of the spelling and grammar mistakes please get a proofreader) and am looking forward to where you take it, and how you get there.
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Knowlege and advice taken to heart. Thank you dear reader!
To answer your question. yes the princesses are attempting to make amends. And as far as i'm aware. Shining has a 'must pritect Twi' complex. And he just had to sit through a day in hell trying to keep his baby sister safe from the humans. Celestia put him in charge but only slightly regretted it. Shinings reasons for acting like an arse are due to be explained next chapter.
And yes... i know i need a proofreader... my usual P.R and friend refuses to look at my story until its completed. Which wont be for a VERY LONG TIME. so i've been thrown over the fryingpan and into the fire in the Proofreading department... sadly my efforts at catching errors appear for naught...
And thanks for the praise! I hope i cant continue to keep you entertained!
Apologies if theres mistakes in this comment. Its currently 5:45am and im on my phone. Spellcheck is disabled and i cant turn it back on...
Read the whole story in one go, felt like i just drank 3 liters of coka cola in one go... awesome story dude. Although now i gotta wait for updates... shit.
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Thanks for the feedback and im glad your enjoying D.E so far. Your words have put a smile on my face.
And dont worry about the updates. My schedule of one update every two to three days has been thrown to the works for a bit because work had finally picked up. Im going to be spending the next few days making up for my huge sleep dept and i'll be writing the next chapter during that time.
I hope i can keep you entertained!
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Only because the changelings were stopped before they could do significant enough damage. And yet Shining Armour forgave them. Even allowing a repentant changeling to live in his own home. Shining Armour isn't cruel or malicious. Protective, yes. But not cruel. This characterization just seems to be done to make your characters heroes for giving him a dressing down.
This whole 'torture the humans' thing just seems to be an angle to create sympathy and move the humans into a situation similar to Unity where they're going to get whatever they want because of the same 'the poor humans have suffered enough' and 'we have no right to rule them' plotline.
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I can see i must skip my 46 hour sleep respite and continue operating on just 5 hours sleep in three days. Because the story has left off on a confusing in-between.
Next chapter comes out soon. Then its back to my bed.
Its my fault. The explanation behind shinings actions was supposed to be in the last chapter but in my rush to give everyone somthing to read i capped off the chapter and sent it out with the plan to post the next chapter a day later. But then my familys epoxy floor company began getting a massive influx of work.
I will see to it that the next chapter comes out soon.
Apologies.
I only read the two most recent chapters: is this just a “let’s shit on Shining Armor story”? Cause this story lays it so thick that I keep waiting for Shining Armor to start kidnapping, torturing and killing the humans when they sleep.
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If that is the current message being delivered by my story then i assure you its not that at all.