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Love the perspective shifts. Need to think a bit about what happens next.
As someone who has done those type of POV shifts before, I feel like it would be a good idea. So long as they don't seem too sudden at least of course. Besides that it seems like a fun idea!
Thanks to Canny's 「Smooth Criminal」 (which will be a fun conversation later when the princesses find out) and your own attacks, The Patient seems to be on his last legs. But like most crazy villains, even when he's bleeding form multiple wounds and most likely has more broken bones then unbroken ones, he still stands. If you didn't know any better, you think his craziness was the only thing stopping the mad stallion from dropping like a bag of bricks.
Your not exactly the picture of health either, as you spot multiple wounds of your own and are bleeding places you didn't even know could bleed. Not to mention you are definitely[/I going to need therapy after all this. Like...a lot of therapy. But besides all that you still feel like you can keep moving for a little while longer.
You should really ask for a good week or two off after this...or maybe a raise.
Canny seems to be doing fine herself, minus the bloodied area of her coat where the Arrow pierced her. Then again she joined the fight mid-way, so it makes sense that she isn't too damaged.
Besides all that, you can feel the battle coming to a close. And it appears your enemy thinks so as well, as with shallow breaths he growls out,
"This...isn't possible! Chaos...Chaos can't loose to the likes you you!"
The crazed stallion slowly starts to get up, blood spurting out of his wounds as his maniac smile returns. His stand appears behind him once more, and his eyes are drowned in insanity.
"You...you and that bitch are nothing but Harmony's pawns! You...you are nothing! YOU HEAR ME! NOTHING! Chaos...Chaos is the ultimate magic...the ultimate source of all things beauty! It will not...it will nOT FALL TO THE LIKES OF YOU! HARMONY WILL NEVER WIN, AHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
You and Canny share an uneasy look before you glare at the mad stallion and demand,
"It's over! It's clear your just struggling to stand at this point! Just give up now and we won't have to hurt you anymore!"
The Patient doesn't appear to hear you, lost in his own mad ramblings.
"Death...deathdeathdeathdeathDEATH! Death is the only outcome! Fighting death, or death imprisoned! CHAOS SHALL RISE, BUT I SHALL DIE!"
You can see his Stand start to get more and more unstable as his ramblings continue, as if his very madness is almost too much for even his own Stand to handle. It looks like its face is slowly decomposing, while the rest of it is melting away into nothingness.
"Uh Star, I know I'm new to the whole 'fighting spirit' thing, but is that supposed to happen?"
The fear in her voice is evident, but you can't give her an answer you don't know. The only other Stands you saw were the princesses after all, and neither of there's did this. But before you think too much on it you decide to save it for later when you weren't being threated by a unstable nutcase.
"You've lost man! Enough with the chaos talk and just calm down!"
Evidently that was the wrong thing to say, as the Patients eyes seem to just dilate as he madly shouts,
"NEVERNEVERNEVERNEVER! CHAOS LIVES! CHAOS SHALL WIN! I MAY FALL BUT THE CHAOS WILL LIVE!"
And with that the mad stallion charges at you, frothing at the mouth as nothing but madness consumes him. Seeing no other choice you act quickly and fold the pony towards you. And with one last Stand Barrage and a final cry from your Stand the stallion flies limply through the air and smacks into the ground, unmoving.
And bam! Since I didn't quiet get Smooth Criminal's power (probably my lack of attention there) I figured I'd just write a neat end to the fight. Hopefully it isn't too much, once I start going its kinda hard to stop till I think its finished hehehehe...
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All good! This works just fine! :)
Just for the record, Smooth Criminal's ability is intangibility. It can make objects pass through things.
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Intangibility you say?
Cammy Perspective
You feel like you're jumping onto a bicycle for the first time without training wheels, but you've got to do something to save Shooting Star. Sending out Smooth Criminal, it blindsides the enemy Stand with a bunch and swipes at the straight jacket straps...and surprisingly, the straps pass through Shooting Star.
"WHAT?!" The Patient says in alarm before Smooth Criminal Spins and kicks Chaos Lives In Everything in the chest, sending them both flying back, the tethers exiting Star's body.
Finding no purchase, he is freed, so you have Smooth Criminal grab him and bring him to you. Surprisingly, when carrying him to safety, Smooth Criminal sort of glides back towards you, eyes never leaving the enemy [Moon Walking]
As Star shakes out of his daze, he looks at you in happiness and relief.
"Cammy! You're Alive!"
"For the time being," you smirk.
"And you have a Stand?"
"If that's what they're called. Let's talk about it later, my ghost can make things go through other things, so let's beat this wanker down!"
"Right!" he says in determination facing the enemy.
It's rusty at first, but you and Star and your ghosts, or rather Stands team up rather well. He folds space to get the enemy Stand in and out of range while Smooth Criminal wails on him. And when he tries to strike either your physical bodies, or your Stands, you reactively use your power to make the blows pass harmlessly through you.
At one point, during a very sporadic violent attack by The Patient and His Stand, Shooting Star folds the both of you into a pocket in the ground. Its kind of cramped, and your muzzles are nearly touching.
"Hmmph, a bit fresh of you to trap a gal in a closed space with ya," you tease to lighten the mood and he chuckles.
"This is just a temporary safe haven. He's still in the ground above us," he says looking up.
"Oh he is is he?" you say as an idea comes to you. "Well, sorry to cut this rendevouz short," you quip before you have Smooth Criminal phase you through the ground, launching yourself into an above ground uppercut which strikes The Patient right under the chin.
"GYAH!" he cries as he is thrown back.
"You What Mate?! You having a giggle with that weak fighting style?!" you taunt your enemy who growls angrily as Star unfolds next to you.
Perspective Shooting Star
"You know, you're picking this up a lot quicker than I did," you tell her impressed.
"Oh Love, I've been quite a few scrappers growing up. A lass has got to protect herself, and you either adapt or die when you live on Ogre Street," she says proudly.
"I thought you were rich?" you ask.
"Yeah, why do you think I got into so many fights? Thieves're everywhere Star," she says taking a defensive position as The Patient begins walking towards you.
"Right, remind me to never visit Trottingham then," you chuckle taking up your own defensive pose.
Here's a Move to Add somewhere in the fight. Cammy launches some gears at the Patient, and Smooth Criminal makes them intangible so even when he tries to block, they go through him, and out the other side. New Divide then folds them on the other side when they become tangible again to launch back at The Patient and imbed in his flanks and back.
Also, one of the gears becomes tangible again halfway inside his gut and he screams in agony.
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During the final beat down, New Divide's VENDA VENDA's overlap with a chant from Smooth Criminal.
"SHAMOSHAMOSHAMOSHAMO!!!"
"VENDETTA!!!" You finish with an uppercut.
"SHAMONE!!!" Cammy finishes with a kick.
And as you can see, I enjoy the perspective shifts
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I like that ending you got there, sounds like something out of EOH, Josuke and Okiasu's DHA to be precise
between Down with Chrysalis and BrownDog77 we have at least most of the fight so i think i'll do something a few moments after the fight and give us direction for next time
after the fight and patching yourself up with your medical supplies you wait a moment just expecting Discord to show up to passive aggressively mock you for your victory, but nothing of the sort happens, so you turn to Cammy and say "Okay I don't think Discord is making an appearance, so we should find the elements bearers and protect them like Celestia asked before Discord makes his next move"
"Right, I was kinda hoping for an explanation after that fight, but we do have more pressing issues right now don't we?" she says with a nod and looks around for a bit and continues with "uh, how long did that fight last for again?"
Your pupils shrink as far as they can. you're not sure how long the fight lasted for either, but it was differently more then enough time for Discord to do plenty. you look around for ponyvilles clock-tower in the vain hope that it still tells the correct time, only to see off in the distance Rainbow Dash fly crazy fast while latching onto a small cloud while the other element bearers chasing after her in a hot air balloon.
"I'm not sure what time it is but I see the elements bearers" you say as you motion for her to follow you as you run towards them getting New Divide ready to fold space again "so let's just add that to the pile of things to figure out later"
i'm not the best at this so feel free to change the wording, and add in Cammys accent
edit: made a few grammar fixs and add a bit about using New Divide and his bandages because why wouldn't he use that