I know that you guys are a little used to me beginning ideas and then taking a while with them, but I can (very) happily say that this one is already finished!
It'll be released over a short space of time. I hope you all have as great a time reading it as I did writing it!
9259981Unfinshed stories trigger me more than a... honestly they just bug me on a weird level. I didn't have anything witty to say. But heh, having a story in progress finish within enough time so I don't have to go back an re read it make me happy. Thank you.
Honestly, this first chapter goes on for a bit longer than it needs to. Maybe shorten it a bit, especially when Rainbow is trying to get Luna to punish her.
There's another fic, hiding in my favorites, that uses this EXACT picture. That's fine, its from an outside source anyway. But I got all excited at first thinking it had updated.
I like this portrayal of Luna. Not so cold Nightmare would probably have been better, not guilt-ridden to the point of ceasing to function, but... Lonely. Very much so. And probably rather nice and approachable too, although not many outside of the Elements would be brave enough to try.
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I know that you guys are a little used to me beginning ideas and then taking a while with them, but I can (very) happily say that this one is already finished!
It'll be released over a short space of time. I hope you all have as great a time reading it as I did writing it!
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Normally you put comments like this in the AN so it doesn't get buried under other people's comments and no one sees it after a short time.
9259981Unfinshed stories trigger me more than a... honestly they just bug me on a weird level. I didn't have anything witty to say. But heh, having a story in progress finish within enough time so I don't have to go back an re read it make me happy.
Thank you.
Honestly, this first chapter goes on for a bit longer than it needs to. Maybe shorten it a bit, especially when Rainbow is trying to get Luna to punish her.
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Lol did you remove the reply part of your comment?
Will there be spanking in this story?
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Yay!
Hey intricate, I like where this one is going so far.
Just gonna follow this one... Keep up the good writing.
Already finished? I’m curious to see if Magic is used to ensure poor Rainbow doesn’t try to get out of her new uniform
There's another fic, hiding in my favorites, that uses this EXACT picture. That's fine, its from an outside source anyway. But I got all excited at first thinking it had updated.
Oh well. still a good read ;-)
I like this portrayal of Luna. Not so cold Nightmare would probably have been better, not guilt-ridden to the point of ceasing to function, but... Lonely. Very much so. And probably rather nice and approachable too, although not many outside of the Elements would be brave enough to try.
Jesus, this is really well done, characterisation is spot on.
Could you finish it please.
Holy shit that was a good chapter i enjoyed that alot :D