Spike Dragon has always had a hard and unfair life on Earth so when his best often to take him to another world he agrees, only to find about some cultural differences
9768944 I wrote how in another chapter how mares have four breasts in this. I want the ponies to be anthro without being to human like as they are magic aliens from another dimension
A decent story, but there are a lot of wrong words sprinkled throughout the story. Some spelling errors, and a few other things that I can't quite point out at the moment...
Mostly try your best to use the proper words when you can. There are several areas where you use words that mean something completely different from what you want them to mean.
and that she had all four of her nipples pierce with barbells. Four?
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I wrote how in another chapter how mares have four breasts in this. I want the ponies to be anthro without being to human like as they are magic aliens from another dimension
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Ah k
Piercings?
might want to edit this one a bit.
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Yes
Before I read this, I must know: Why haven't government agencies tried to study Spike?
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Which government?
Holy run-on sentences, bad grammar and spelling.
A decent story, but there are a lot of wrong words sprinkled throughout the story. Some spelling errors, and a few other things that I can't quite point out at the moment...
Mostly try your best to use the proper words when you can. There are several areas where you use words that mean something completely different from what you want them to mean.
I still hope The princess sisters will join the herd to.