But part of you had to admit it was really damn exciting, and that feeling was only exemplified when she finally placed her hand against your hardening cock, rubbing it through the fabric.

Shouldn't "exemplified" be "amplified"?

That aside, this was hot.

It should. Mistake, fast writing binge. Thanks though! Will fix now.

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You're welcome!

For me, it was a mistake introducing Flutters so early. Now I'm just gonna feel blue balled until something happens with her. Her or Sunset. She looks damn good in a uniform.

But don't think I didn't enjoy the chapter. It was good and it has been a great start overall.

I ship it. Lol love it hope for the next chapter to be soon

You know, I didn't comment it, but I was actually hoping that Indigo would be our first fuck. It makes too much sense to not do it.

And this bloody better not be the end of it. I want to see the middle and end of this in the next chapter!

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I disagree. What you call blue balling, I call build-up. Also, I found her backstory really interesting and enjoyed the conversation as a really genuine one. It made me excited for the rest of the story and how the rest of the main 6 got into jail.

See is much more elegant most will mention what his exact sizes and you didn’t you let the imagination of the reader to take into account all on their own with a clever Word play

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I should have worded it better so it was more obvious, but I wasn't being serious there. I don't actually have a problem with the story so far and I understand perfectly the importance of build up. I was just having a bit of fun over the fact that Fluttershy is my MLP waifu.

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Yeah, it's pretty hard to tell when someone's being playful or sarcastic on the internet unless they're holding a sign saying "I'M NOT SERIOUS!" I know I've gotten flak for sarcasm that was taken seriously before.

A nice hot steamy car blowjob.

Oh damn! If her blowjob is that good, then this guy is in for the time of his life for the night!

So when are we readers gonna get the puhh?

If Sunset Shimmer isn't the warden, then what is her title?

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She's the major, highest uniform rank there. There are a few positions between her and the warden, all suits.

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damn straight😏

Oh, this takes me back.

I would bust a gut if the warden was Celestia, and this whole thing was just a troll.

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Well, legally there is no reason she couldn't own the prison, and with the past student here it would make sense.

I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! I'm itching to know what happens next!

This is one of the best stories I have read, good job.

And *poof* just like that I have a new kink, thanks for that.

That was hot.

When's the next chapter?

Unf, that was a well done chapter, kinky as fuck Indigo, I very much *approve* of this, hahaha.

Good show, good show!

"I'm not exactly insured to drive your car," you said, perfectly happy to be driving to destination fuck but not exactly looking to get picked up along the way. "Are you sure this is alright? Kinda weird for us of all people to be breaking the law."

That’s against the law?

You know what? Fuck it. This job might have been hell in some respects, but it came with some pretty damn good perks. Plus, you didn't crash. You're doing pretty great right now.

He’s not wrong.