when all that was left was ashes, she would again clothe herself in flame. Rising from the dust of her past to rekindle the spark of her future. She was a Phoenix, her own salvation; rebirthed, renewed, resurrected. L. Torenson an anon-a-miss tale
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Ok first, I'm glad that someone(s) decided to come around. Second, the Dazzlings didn't get nearly enough face time. I wanted to hear at least some of their plan. Last, both are good but I'd prefer SunDagio over FlutterPie, if I had to choose just saying. All in all it wasn't a bad chapter it just could've used a little more development.
Of course they would be stubborn, Pinkie and Fluttershy. They wouldn't know true Honesty, Loyalty and Generosity if it yanked them by the hair, punched them in the face and kicked them in the hindquarters.
That's why when the truth gets revealed, I'm going enjoy watching them on all fours, begging for forgiveness before Sunset.
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Apparently Sunset's waiting to enjoy that moment too as am I.
Other than something basic like “channeling” or “transform” I got nothing.
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Thanks for trying! I will take them into consideration.
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You’re welcome. Everything else that came to mind was significantly longer (tap into their essence) or overly poetic (sing the body equine). Pony up is hard to replace given how to the point it is and how it wouldn’t be something you could misinterpret if you had seen the phenomenon.
Ok, Sunset has some old ally again.... What now?
god dammit sunset you need to be stronger.
The fact that Pinkie and Fluttershy came to their senses before the truth was revealed says a lot about them. Perhaps a little leeway can be allowed in the forgiveness department. Just a little though.
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They still need to earn their forgiveness.
Not surprised that those 2 were the ones to figure it out first. Though to be honest given how they are..... their betrayal had to have been the most serrated of knives.
Dude, are you sure you got the story tags right on this? I personally don't see them fitting very well with this setting.
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This is from chapter 4. I'm curious to know when this is going to happen.
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Well sunset did give celstia all her old blackmail matrile. Lots of students got in to big trouble
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Yeah but Trixie's a braggart and Sandalwood's a cornball. Unless it was like Sandalwood trying to score some green in school or something, it's unlikely they did anything that would really get themselves in enough trouble to be considered payback.
"Don’t worry. We’ll make them see reason one way or another." I'm not sure I like the looks of that, it almost seems like it's going to be forgiveness f**k all around soon enough.......
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Nope the other 3 arent geting off that easy hell sunset doesnt entierly turst fultershy and pinkie. I can't say much more sinve spoliers but have u seen bojack horseman? The episode with his old best friend
Funny thing, they didn't.
Seriously though, I'm sorry, but this just isn't for me. Best of luck to you.