Nice, I don’t think I’ve seen an anon story where Sunset just tries to graduate as opposed to transfer. One thing though, sentient just means something has senses. Sapient is the word for having intellect.

I would've just sucker punched RD.

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Sorry got them mixed up. Ill fix that.
I figured that since she was so smart why npy. Plus its a nice change of pace.

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I did think about having a fight in the bathroom but desied agasit it.

“In order to rise from its own ashes a Phoenix must first burn” - Octavia E. Butler, parable of the talents

I can already tell; this is going to be a fun chapter. <-- sarcasm

Sunset felt her heart leap with excitement. A way out! College sounded wonderful, a real challenge. Sunset could only imagine how much she would learn and discover while there. Twilight would hopeful be excited for her.

Ooh! I've not seen this one before. Anon-A-Miss to college sounds interesting. I wonder what interesting conflicts will arise. I must say though, the SATs are wholly inferior to the ACTs. The SATs test what you know; the ACTs test how well you think, in theory anyway.

Argh! I need moar!
In all seriousness though, this is just getting better as it goes. I hope to see more soon, but don't burn yourself out. I'd hate to see this end up unfinished.

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Thank you so much. I thought college wound be more interesting than just transferring schools. Besides transferring schools would alram Twilight. Going to College sounds great espilly to twilight who loves to learn as well. I try to wirte a little each day. But i got vacation coming up so i might get more wirteing in.

Interesting, Sunset leaving by graduating instead of heading Crystal Prep. Lets see where we go from here.

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Thank you. As much as i enjoy her going to crystal prep i wanted something new.

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And something new you have done

i love sunset's no bull attitude its a nice change good job

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Thank you.

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Np

i like this story it feels like how the actual sunset would react.
cant wait to see more! :D

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Thank you! Ive been think about it for awhile now.

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Ah.

Well that's not bad at all, it's very good even. (not that I can judge on writing quality, I'm only decent in english)
I feel like you're trying to speed up the "aftermath" of Anon-A-Miss, a clean break with the school and then going forward.
I hope you do well, good luck for the rest.

"but that was neither here nor now"

This literally means the same thing it should be neither here nor there

...Yowch. I don't think I can take another chapter of this. Last chapter was at least readable. But this chapter? You kept swapping between past and present tense. You said things like "surping" and "relate" instead of "surprising" and "retaliate," respectively. Your dialogue tagging was clunky. This is in pretty desperate need of some editing.

I know I’m late but I loved this, keep trying your best

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Thank u. I stared rewatching the show to help me fall in love with the world once more