You should have him sing "perfect" by ed sheeran to rara. I think it fits well with the story

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I chose "Always There" because the song was a quartet in the movie, so I wanted it to match the quarted the OC was in with Rara, Fortis and Fleur, so I apologize if I didn't use that song.

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Its alright. I should rephrase what i said. You should use "perfect" by ef sheeran as a way for the main character to show his feelings to coloratura.

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Either that or Galway Girl, I've come to really like that song

Thank you so much for this second chapter :) And thanks for looking at my story, means a lot. Good luck with the rest of the chapters!

Cute chapter, bro! I look forward to the name that the main character of this story is going to get!

Excellent as always my friend

I think that if he played "this is gospel" for the singing competition, applejack would have been crying.

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Also good job as always, but make sure to grammar check when you can.

“Just listen to yourselves, it’s rather dreadful. So what if Rara’s with a human, you don’t see me judging her. You shouldn’t be so quick to judge others,” said a female voice. You and Rara turned your attention to this elegant unicorn mare who was also accompanied by a human and had a child of their own.

“L-Lady Fleur! You’re not in the least bit disgusted?!” one of the nobles asked.

“Why would I be disgusted? Have you ponies forgotten that the princesses are married to humans themselves? And they were commoners once in their lives, just like mine. Before you open those uptight mouths of yours, you need to start treating others with respect! I’m ashamed that this whole city is doesn’t appreciate the simpler things in life,” she scolded.

“B-But milady, he could just be using her!” another noble persisted.

“I’d prefer if you didn’t jump to conclusions and go about your daily business or I will alert this constant harassing to the princesses! We might be nobles, but you never show it through the kindness in your hearts... if you can even show kindness. Now, I’m going to make this perfectly clear to you all: no more judging others by their social standing, am I making myself clear?”

The nobles backed off and nodded at the elegant mare. They bowed to you and made a mad dash to avoid anymore confrontation from the mare called Fleur.

Dayum remind me not to piss her off.

After the model recruits were finished, Fleur De Lis and a couple of pro models made their way on the runway, posing for the cameras and blowing kisses to her fans. Fortis had a perfect view from backstage as Fleur’s manager.

Man, I can picture it now I wonder if I should get a kiss from her after this.

“Oh darling, I’m so sorry to hear that,” Fleur said with tears forming in her eyes.

(Sniff) yeah, me too.

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I can tell you really love Fleur

That was great, including what the OC did to that snobbish pony who screw rara over himself, simply these snobs ponies still never learn to suck it up and accept it. As of now, this OC is now taking a step to a new life in Equestria.

Svengallop growled and attempted to grab your shirt, but you ended up grabbing his wrist and held it in a vice grip, tightening it and bringing Svengallop to his knees.

“I’m only going to say this once more... get... out… of my sight!” you growled, intimidating the stallion and releasing your grip on his wrist. You could see a small wet area between his pants. He crawled backwards and got up, sprinting away from you and Rara.

That bastard got what he deserved.

So far you were enjoying yourself, though you still couldn’t help wondering if that snobbish Svengallop was going to try to pull anything. After all, you did humiliate him in public after rejecting his offer.

Is he still breathing? If the answer is yes then he is up to something.

Seriously why has no one tried him to a railroad track?

I showed svengallop that you dont mess with me