Although the style of this chapter was different I still enjoyed it quite thoroughly. It was a fresh breath of something new and unique to the stories feel. I can't wait for the next update though. I am very excited!
1354752 You said you fixed the name swapping 3 Days ago, but I still see it..
Here's where it's Applebloom "Do you wanna come in?" Scootaloo motioned to the door. Applebloom nodded, and Scootaloo led them inside. When Scoot closed the door behind Applebloom, the red-head sighed. She was just going to have to come out with it. It might hurt Scootaloo, but she needed to make her feelings known.
"Scoot, listen-" her words were cut off. Scoot had embraced her.
"I'm sorry." Scootaloo's voice came out in harsh gasps, as if she was desperate for air. "You don't deserve this. I care about you so much. But... " Scootaloo took a few steps back, turning her face to try and keep her friend from seeing her expression. "Every time I see you now, I just feel confused. No, not even when I see you. Whenever I think about you, everything starts to get weird. You're my most loyal and loved friend, and I never imagined that I'd want anything more then that. Especially since... well, you know."
Then Suddenly! Applejack goes Ninja & swaps place with Bloom
"Know what?" Applejack took a step closer to Scootaloo, staring her straight in the eye.
"Well, we're both..."
"Girls. Yeah, crazy world we live in," snarled Applejack. "It must be so tough admitting that you like other women. I have no idea what you're going through." Scootaloo shook her head sadly.
"That's just it... you don't," sighed Scootaloo. Applebloom could only stare at her, open mouthed.
Suddenly, Bloom appears from God knows where & swaps place for a second
"I'm sorry, what?" asked Applebloom. "Are you bein' serious?"
"Dead," answered Scootaloo. "You see, when you came out, you had friends and family that would accept you. It was hard, but you knew you could get through it. But me... no, I don't think I could. I know it was tough, but when it really comes down to it, you had it easy. Not to mention, you told me that you had feelings for girls your entire life. Well, I haven't. I dated boys through high school, not because I had to, but because I wanted to. I had fun with them... I was attracted to them. I even loved some of them. But throughout all that, I had feelings for you. I felt so conflicted. I wasn't sure what I was."
And Jack's back
"Then why put a label on it?" Applejack put an arm around her friend.
Then Bloom Swaps back and is here to stay, sweet lord hallelujah.
"I guess," sighed Scootaloo. "This is a lot to take in. I'm not exactly..."
"Open to this sort of thing?" nudged Applebloom. Scootaloo nodded. "Well, maybe you should be. Better to try this stuff out now while you're young then when you're committed to a family."
Pardon the long comment, just wanted to make sure that it was easy to point out. Happy to see you being alive again
You wrote Applejack instead of Applebloom in there. I can't really point it out from my phone, just a heads-up.
1354729 Caught it, changed it. Thanks dude.
Always nice seeing your stuff pop up! Good chapter!
Actually, I'm more surprised that you left my comment in there than anything else...
This is still so great why end it here, but 7 days maybe could update? That Is pretty awsome.
1355005 Not ending the whole story here, just the chapter. Sorry if that wasn't clear.
1355582 HA excuse my stupidity on that.
YES FINALLY UPDATE
Although the style of this chapter was different I still enjoyed it quite thoroughly. It was a fresh breath of something new and unique to the stories feel. I can't wait for the next update though. I am very excited!
....I thought this was dead.
YOU'RE ALIVE FICY! :D
Thanks boss, also: nice job.
"pair of star crossed lovers"
Shakespeare reference never gets old!
Also hurray for updates!
1354752
You said you fixed the name swapping 3 Days ago, but I still see it..
Here's where it's Applebloom
"Do you wanna come in?" Scootaloo motioned to the door. Applebloom nodded, and Scootaloo led them inside. When Scoot closed the door behind Applebloom, the red-head sighed. She was just going to have to come out with it. It might hurt Scootaloo, but she needed to make her feelings known.
"Scoot, listen-" her words were cut off. Scoot had embraced her.
"I'm sorry." Scootaloo's voice came out in harsh gasps, as if she was desperate for air. "You don't deserve this. I care about you so much. But... " Scootaloo took a few steps back, turning her face to try and keep her friend from seeing her expression. "Every time I see you now, I just feel confused. No, not even when I see you. Whenever I think about you, everything starts to get weird. You're my most loyal and loved friend, and I never imagined that I'd want anything more then that. Especially since... well, you know."
Then Suddenly! Applejack goes Ninja & swaps place with Bloom
"Know what?" Applejack took a step closer to Scootaloo, staring her straight in the eye.
"Well, we're both..."
"Girls. Yeah, crazy world we live in," snarled Applejack. "It must be so tough admitting that you like other women. I have no idea what you're going through." Scootaloo shook her head sadly.
"That's just it... you don't," sighed Scootaloo. Applebloom could only stare at her, open mouthed.
Suddenly, Bloom appears from God knows where & swaps place for a second
"I'm sorry, what?" asked Applebloom. "Are you bein' serious?"
"Dead," answered Scootaloo. "You see, when you came out, you had friends and family that would accept you. It was hard, but you knew you could get through it. But me... no, I don't think I could. I know it was tough, but when it really comes down to it, you had it easy. Not to mention, you told me that you had feelings for girls your entire life. Well, I haven't. I dated boys through high school, not because I had to, but because I wanted to. I had fun with them... I was attracted to them. I even loved some of them. But throughout all that, I had feelings for you. I felt so conflicted. I wasn't sure what I was."
And Jack's back
"Then why put a label on it?" Applejack put an arm around her friend.
Then Bloom Swaps back and is here to stay, sweet lord hallelujah.
"I guess," sighed Scootaloo. "This is a lot to take in. I'm not exactly..."
"Open to this sort of thing?" nudged Applebloom. Scootaloo nodded. "Well, maybe you should be. Better to try this stuff out now while you're young then when you're committed to a family."
Pardon the long comment, just wanted to make sure that it was easy to point out.
Happy to see you being alive again
1372455 Holy crispy crackers. I shall fix that immediately... don't know how that got by me. I blame rap music. But thanks, I appreciate it.
More coming?
updates?
Woah, I remember seeing this when I first made my account.
Still no updates?
Did something happen?
Also, I apologize if this annoys you...
Well, since it's only September 22nd, how was this updated the 29th?
Now, I know you haven't always bee fast with updates, but it has bee over a year now; that's kinda pushing it.
I swear, if you don't finish this then I will. UPATE ALREADY JEEEZ! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! ITS BEEN OVER A YEAR!