Okay, the new update is here! Woo, I finally did it, all right! So, a few things-
-The new blog post kinda wigged me out a little- but I think the characters have enough resemblance to their MLP counterparts, and it's well written enough that it will avoid any sort of trouble.
-Next (chapter? Not really chapters, but whatever) update is being written, so it shouldn't take like a month this time.
-As always, I welcome all comments, and (constructive) criticisms. Thanks!

Oh, and derp, rating is now mature because of boobies and such.

W00T! And so the action begins.
As well as the drama. And dem tits...
*smacks forehead* ugh, perv...But yes, dem tits.

Called it I knew Scootaloo was gonna be gay.

OH MY GOD UPDATE!!!

Criticism: I like the new pacing that switches from character to character. It makes the story much more interesting learning about the all the characters problems. I also find it a little disorienting when it got to the end though. The applebloom scene felt just a little bit rushed, but other wise it was fantastic.

Keep doing what you do. I love this story.

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That's an easy one to figure out, the rushed nature of the scene that is. The reason it feels rushed is because it's a rather important event *after* the real important event of this chapter. Had it been me, I'd have cut this for a later day, possibly as the climax to it's own chapter, and finished this one up with another Sweetie Belle going to bed scene, to balance out the one earlier on in the chapter, possibly noting how her room felt different to her this time - knowing that Spike liked her. That said... I don't know where this is going, so I'm assuming making the ScootaBloom has a relevance in the timeline (Jayce here likes to write in 'days', if you hadn't noticed from his earlier fiction work).

Keep reading, the boss will keep writing!

I just found this fic and it's pretty good so far. I like that it tackles each of the CMCs and it feels pretty believable, I like romance, drama, and slice of life and I'm getting that from this so I'll look forward to the next chapter.

This was a beautiful chapter

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Well, that escalated quickly

That was fucking awesome. I want more Plz.

New chapter later today or tomorrow. Took me long enough, I know.