Hmm... if Luna is trying to stage a coup, i suspect it isn't completely voluntary on her part since i believe the nightmare still has a hold on her.
My hypothesis: The elements only weakened it to the point where it can only keep up the masquerade of being Luna. But if i am correct in assuming this, then i suspect that the actual Princess Luna is still imprisoned in her own body that the nightmare controls.... thousand years is a long time to construct and reinforce a prison after all..... even more so due to magic
8714057 at the moment yes, yes i am. If it turns out its the nightmare pulling the strings i doubt it would stay but if luna even had a shred of control she is still a dead mare in my eyes
"This is my first and only warning, fledgling ," Luna intoned coldly as the dark blue glow of her horn died down, "watch thy tongue, lest I decide to tear it from thine mouth ."
"Oh. Oh wow ," he let out a bark of laughter, "Princess, are... are you actually trying to stage a coup against your sister, again ? After what happened last time?"
8714362 I've totally heard "Blacklight Sparkle" somewhere before... or was that Darklight? Nevertheless, both are OK. I like Twirus (Tvirus... T-virus? heh ) better though)
So this Luna has a history with Sombra? and she wasn't been corrupted this time? OK, that part I can understand. What I still don't understand is why let the Mane 6 alive when she executed her plan? Just to let them have opportunity to bite back later? Something still doesn't make sense to me.
Guess I still have to wait and see the next chapter.
Lore, Lore and more fucking LORE... I hate extensive lore based stories, like stories that entirely build their world from lore... I just skimmed through this, and what I got is that gryphons and Luna are bitches, bad shit goes and yada yada... my head
I have to go with the Nightmare Moon wearing Luna as a meat puppet theory, if only for the reason that it makes the most sense. But hey, thats just a -Copyrite Strike-
8715501 I'm sorry you feel that way, man. Honestly I'm not really trying to make the story lore based, I'm just going with what I think fits best. If I have to throw some lore in here and there, that's what I'm gonna do.
"This is my first and only warning, fledgling ," Luna intoned coldly as the dark blue glow of her horn died down, "watch thy tongue, lest I decide to tear it from thine mouth ."
Jeez! Luna's a savage!
"I'm getting there, whelp. Patience,"
Since when are you known for patience Luna?
"You see, Dr. Pair and I have prepared a-" she gave a stray flicker of the ear as she idly examined a few scrolls Base Pair had left on the table "-a gift for the six mares. Something they might find surprising, but I am sure they will come to enjoy... in time.
And just what gift is that, your Highness?
"Indeed," she finally answered, "though it will not be the same as it once was. I have an... ally to assist in my endeavors."
It's Sombra, isn't it? The Harbinger of Fear and Hatred Sombra?
"Once they've accepted their gift, they will be indisposed for the next several years," She turned to glance at Asger out of the corner of her eye, "When they inevitably awaken, they will find themselves lost and confused. They may even experience some loss of memory.
8847469 Sombra doesn't exist yet, he's still lost in time with the empire, they probably fell in love or something during the first fight, and she knows he will fight with her, or maybe she used dark magic to talk with him, like how twilight opened a portal to the dimension Starswirl and the others went to.
Several of the tables were lined up near the back with various devices such as microscopes, beakers, Braysen burners, shakers, mixers, and other scientific knick-knacks.
Brayson burners so are they bunson burners made by donkeys lol
I hope that you have a REALLY good reason for making Luna evil. She was corrupted because of her deep sorrow and anger. She genuinely tried to re-connect with common ponies across the land. We both know that she wouldn`t do this normally. So I REALLY hope you made her act like this for a reason.
nice work on it.
soooooo...... lunas a dead mare.... i dont care how bad celly pleads for her life if i was twi i would kill luna..... slowly..... with a spork
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A sport has sharp edges....use a wooden spoon
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So, you're all for Luna's death, huh?
Interesting...
Hmm... if Luna is trying to stage a coup, i suspect it isn't completely voluntary on her part since i believe the nightmare still has a hold on her.
My hypothesis: The elements only weakened it to the point where it can only keep up the masquerade of being Luna. But if i am correct in assuming this, then i suspect that the actual Princess Luna is still imprisoned in her own body that the nightmare controls.... thousand years is a long time to construct and reinforce a prison after all..... even more so due to magic
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at the moment yes, yes i am. If it turns out its the nightmare pulling the strings i doubt it would stay but if luna even had a shred of control she is still a dead mare in my eyes
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All I will say is that that's an interesting hypothesis and leave it at that.
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I won't say one way or the other, but I can certainly see where you're coming from.
this is Doctor
Luna scoffed
Forward charrrge! <o/
Jeez, Luna has a temper!
piqued
This reminds me of a certain other scheme...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, man. A whole two months of planning. I get that you're working on a time table here, Luna, but two months of planning is nothing to get smug over.
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Thanks I knew something was off.
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Man, I really need to go back and watch that movie. Haven't seen it in years.
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I've totally heard "Blacklight Sparkle" somewhere before... or was that Darklight?
Nevertheless, both are OK. I like Twirus (Tvirus... T-virus? heh ) better though)
So this Luna has a history with Sombra? and she wasn't been corrupted this time? OK, that part I can understand.
What I still don't understand is why let the Mane 6 alive when she executed her plan? Just to let them have opportunity to bite back later? Something still doesn't make sense to me.
Guess I still have to wait and see the next chapter.
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Oh, there's a reason for it, trust me. I may not have everything planned out but I'm doing my best to cover my bases as I go.
8714327 Also.....
http://ytcropper.com/cropped/y35a78cbe4df81c
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Nah, to cheesy, how about... The Twifecta... nah to edgy, lets go with Twirus
Lore, Lore and more fucking LORE... I hate extensive lore based stories, like stories that entirely build their world from lore... I just skimmed through this, and what I got is that gryphons and Luna are bitches, bad shit goes and yada yada... my head
I have to go with the Nightmare Moon wearing Luna as a meat puppet theory, if only for the reason that it makes the most sense. But hey, thats just a -Copyrite Strike-
Good stuff
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I'm sorry you feel that way, man. Honestly I'm not really trying to make the story lore based, I'm just going with what I think fits best. If I have to throw some lore in here and there, that's what I'm gonna do.
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Not your fault, I'm just picky and really bitchy, write anyway you want!
Jeez! Luna's a savage!
Since when are you known for patience Luna?
And just what gift is that, your Highness?
It's Sombra, isn't it? The Harbinger of Fear and Hatred Sombra?
...wait.... No...no! Luna couldn't have-!
Is luna just naturally evil in this story or did sombra somehow turn her into his fuck toy puppet?
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Sombra doesn't exist yet, he's still lost in time with the empire, they probably fell in love or something during the first fight, and she knows he will fight with her, or maybe she used dark magic to talk with him, like how twilight opened a portal to the dimension Starswirl and the others went to.
Oh yeah, two months planning, what a well thought out plan you just have
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InB4 to the sunnnnn
Brayson burners so are they bunson burners made by donkeys lol
I hope that you have a REALLY good reason for making Luna evil. She was corrupted because of her deep sorrow and anger. She genuinely tried to re-connect with common ponies across the land. We both know that she wouldn`t do this normally. So I REALLY hope you made her act like this for a reason.
Aw, evil Luna.
Yeah me thinks that Nightmare was just playing the long game after getting blasted way back when in this time-line.