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I'm getting a shit ton of Sweet Apple Massacre vibes
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Is that a bad thing? Honestly, I just had to google the reference. Any similarities are totally unintentional.
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Macs attitude is similar but otherwise it's not much.
Becides. It's RD being raped not the CMC
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Makes sense. Thanks for the info. I'm glad I know the reference now.
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Your welcome. I hope to see Mac get what he deserves
I applaud what you're trying to do, but... well. Your past reviewer already said it.
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Thank you for the comment. Are you referring to the previous comment about Sweet Apple Massacre? I just want to make sure. Perhaps, I need to go take a look a deeper look at that story. From the brief description I read, they aren't similar, but with only this chapter to consider I can see why there might seem to be some crossover.
my mind went to a a dark place as rainbow gets a rape baby from this
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That would be dark. I am comfortable revealing that is not the direction this story is going.
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understandable and I never said that that is where the story is heading i was just giving my thoughts as I read the story
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Makes sense. Sorry for the confusion and thanks for the comment.
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no peoblem I get the feelin that you are shipping rarity and rainbow tho
Why all the downvotes?
After reading your AN blog, I'm cautiously optimistic regarding this story, and will keep an eye on it.
However, I think due to the graphic nature of the opening chapter, having the follow-up be delayed to Tuesday may not be the wisest course of action, here. You said yourself in the blog that chapters that were broken down into two parts (like this one seems to be) should be read together, but having a two-day separation between them might turn off readers if the subject matter is particularly sensitive.
While I only have the first chapter and synopsis to base my initial thoughts upon, I can see potential in the story, but leaving out the closure of this graphic opening scene in this way feels somewhat poorly executed, logistically speaking.
Nevertheless, I will wait and see where the story goes from here before I make a decision on whether to continue following it.
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Yeah i was also surprised at the polarization
If i had to guess it's cause this is a Big Mac written with a lot of artistic license; I am sympathetic to that as this is a far cry from anything canon to that character, but I think this story is more interesting with the perpetrator being someone familiar to Dash, since that mirrors real life (https://www.rainn.org/statistics/perpetrators-sexual-violence)
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Thank you. That is a very helpful thought. I think you're probably right, which is why I just posted chapter two.
Thank you for reading the AN and for your optimism. I hope the story doesn't disappoint.
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I honestly wish I knew. I think Captain Croissandwich makes an excellent point. Publishing this first chapter without any follow up may have been a mistake. My other guesses are that some readers simply find the subject matter distasteful or don't like the direction they think the story is going.
I'm guessing that there's going to be a twist by the end of the story:
This isn't really Big Mac; it's a changeling.
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Dark mature fics always get some downvotes from people who just look at the tags and don't read the story. Then you have a very likeable character commiting vile acts which will induce more downvotes no matter how well written the story is.
Somepony please save Rainbow Dash!
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Most crimes are perpetrated by someone close to the victim. That's what I've heard in all my years of watching Forensic Files and other such shows.
I am curious to see where this ultimately goes myself.
That cover art is haunting. The Mona Lisa-esque not-sure-if-it’s-a-smile, the eyes filled with unfathomable depths of pain, the extent of her injuries plain for all to see.
A bullet is too good for this monster wearing Big Mac’s skin. I would Anton Chigurh him. Captive bolt pistol to the head, and then start sawing him open. Make basashi out of his muscles, and soup stock and glue out of his bones and hooves. He’s forfeited his right to be a person. He’s just latent sausage meat.
The Raridash hurt-comfort thing you have going on is just begging for an eventual romance. I know you’ve pledged to be more nuanced than that; I read your blog and I can see where you’re coming from - it would kinda suck to use RD’s trauma as an excuse for her to get together with Rarity. On the other hand, Rarity’s been so kind and intimate with RD in this that it seems almost inevitable that some attraction would develop. Then again, it’s clear that Rarity’s mostly operating on a combination of guesswork and her natural generosity, so there’s always a chance she could make some misstep somewhere that ends up pushing them apart, but I’d fear for RD’s psyche if she lost her living security blanket.
Would you do that to RD? Have her end up all alone and spiraling into depression, anxiety and possibly suicide? No, that would be too cliche. RD’s broken, but now, one way or another, her friends will put her back together again.
10/10, top-notch H/C.
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I have had this fanfiction on my to-read list for quite a while. Far from the most brutal fiction I have read, but I guess this one is more rooted in reality and thus hurts more.
So yeah...I feel sick now. I am curious about how this will unfold. We are talking about the brother of one of her closest friend. Things...will never be the same.