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I love how you write the interaction between Rarity and Rainbow. I love the tangents into things about wings and horns and friends, and how Rainbow is noticing all these little things about Rarity while she tries to drown out what happened to her. It's sad but it's like Rarity brings her moments of peace.
Thank you. These were some of my favorite scenes to write. They're so bittersweet.
The depth of your dialogue is impressive, I mean every interaction slowly opens the characters up. There is never a moment of back peddling or descriptive lapses in your writing that make your characterizations seem distant or lost. Once again, great work on this chapter and I can't wait to see where you lead on from here.
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Thank you very much. Writing the dialogue is really how I discovered the bones of the story, and where things were going, and how the different characters were going to sort themselves out. I'm so glad you're enjoying things so far.
Poor Dash...unable to go back to the one thing she’s always loved being...poor girl....
This the best portrayl of Rarity I've read.