Ok, question. Spoilers. When Voron said to vellum "our children will carry on our legacy", did that mean Voron reproduced with his own daughter, or did it mean vellum had kids of her own with someone else?
So... What would have happened if Vinyl had just cast the inhibiting curse on Voron? Like, that's an entire Chekov's Gun that didn't end up playing out, right there. He always underestimated her unicorn power over her vampire power, it's only fitting that that's what does him in.
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This was a thoroughly epic showdown. Seriously, this chapter was visceral in how intense it was. All the violence was some of the best and bloodiest combat I've seen on the site. A couple of lines had me feeling a little ill at the right places too. Though, I'd have to ask that you should please bump up the rating of the story. This chapter solidified how explicit the violence got, with huge passages dedicated to graphic combat and mutilation. None of this is in line with teen fiction according to site rules. I've written mature stories that have had some tamer gore than what's presented here, and it isn't fair to rate NSFW content as SFW.
“Get off me!” Vellum shrieked. “You traitor! You don’t deserve to be part of Daddy’s court!”
Vinyl: "That's the plan."
“Vinyl!” she giggled. “I have to go to work! And I really do need a shower first!” “Snuggles eclipse showers.” “They do not!” “Do too.”
Snuggling with a cute pony eclipses everything, Octi... You should know that.
His body was still in the burned pile, as twisted outside now as he had always been on the inside. Vinyl had no compulsion to dig him out. She had watched from behind her barrier as he burned. It hadn’t been enough to stake him the way old legends demanded you stake vampires. [...] “He’s gone, Tavi. He’s … really gone.”
Hopefully... Better double check this.
“I’d rather be one of Celestia’s children than the daughter of someone so pathetic not even his own father could stand to have him around. No matter what you do, you’ll never be good enough for him. Never.”
Hold on! Does that mean Vorons father is still out there, hiding, waiting (and probably plotting) in the shadows?
I like how I can recognize that Vellum was just as much a victim as Vinyl. She just drank the Kool-aid, and her death was really satisfying.
Her broken leg shrieked but she threw all her weight and strength into plunging the broken shaft of the wooden cello neck up, under his ribcage and into his twisted black heart.
Good Lord, what an epic battle between family.
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Ok, question. Spoilers. When Voron said to vellum "our children will carry on our legacy", did that mean Voron reproduced with his own daughter, or did it mean vellum had kids of her own with someone else?
So... What would have happened if Vinyl had just cast the inhibiting curse on Voron? Like, that's an entire Chekov's Gun that didn't end up playing out, right there. He always underestimated her unicorn power over her vampire power, it's only fitting that that's what does him in.
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Okay, but why you offended all of a sudden? It's just a question bro/dudett! Lighten up!
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And Voron is a despicable character, so I wouldn't put it past him.
This was a thoroughly epic showdown. Seriously, this chapter was visceral in how intense it was. All the violence was some of the best and bloodiest combat I've seen on the site. A couple of lines had me feeling a little ill at the right places too. Though, I'd have to ask that you should please bump up the rating of the story. This chapter solidified how explicit the violence got, with huge passages dedicated to graphic combat and mutilation. None of this is in line with teen fiction according to site rules. I've written mature stories that have had some tamer gore than what's presented here, and it isn't fair to rate NSFW content as SFW.
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Never underestimate evil. If he thought it would benefit his bloodline, he probably would. God, I hope not though...
Vinyl: "That's the plan."
Snuggling with a cute pony eclipses everything, Octi...
You should know that.
Hopefully...
Better double check this.
Hold on!
Does that mean Vorons father is still out there, hiding, waiting (and probably plotting) in the shadows?
Well, hell. o.o
I like how I can recognize that Vellum was just as much a victim as Vinyl. She just drank the Kool-aid, and her death was really satisfying.
Also, this is really fucking cool. :D