Very interesting dynamic these two are forming. I actually like it quite a lot. also I can't wait to see how you deal with tempests emotional turmoil and struggles. It will be exciting to say the least how Twilight will fix tempests broken soul. I'm a sucker for cute lovey things so i would love to see something along the lines of their relationship being the key to helping tempest on a new path to redemption.
Moon's summary of the prior villains is inaccurate. Perhaps her pride blinds her? Twilight's Cutie swap was unexpected, did Starlight actually teach that to her? Something tells us Moon will start conniving soon, whether for good or ill remains to be seen... Keep going! ;)
If I recall, her staff ended up being absolutely nothing more than a plain old stick. She could steal the marks without it. It was essentially just for show, to fool others into believing that power was a staff rather than her own. Don't really remember why she did it that way though.
8521457 Because she was telling everypony in town that she had also given up her Cutie Mark and talent and couldn't let them know that she was just faking it; by claiming it was the staff doing the mark removal she avoided letting on that she was still able to use advanced magic on her own.
Very interesting dynamic these two are forming. I actually like it quite a lot. also I can't wait to see how you deal with tempests emotional turmoil and struggles. It will be exciting to say the least how Twilight will fix tempests broken soul. I'm a sucker for cute lovey things so i would love to see something along the lines of their relationship being the key to helping tempest on a new path to redemption.
Moon's summary of the prior villains is inaccurate. Perhaps her pride blinds her?
Twilight's Cutie swap was unexpected, did Starlight actually teach that to her?
Something tells us Moon will start conniving soon, whether for good or ill remains to be seen...
Keep going! ;)
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She changed the mark on the armor, not the actual cutie mark
Moon will play a bigger role later
If I recall, her staff ended up being absolutely nothing more than a plain old stick. She could steal the marks without it. It was essentially just for show, to fool others into believing that power was a staff rather than her own. Don't really remember why she did it that way though.
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As I said, Moon will play a bigger role later with all the stuff she says
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Okay then. I'll shut up now.
Please continue.
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Because she was telling everypony in town that she had also given up her Cutie Mark and talent and couldn't let them know that she was just faking it; by claiming it was the staff doing the mark removal she avoided letting on that she was still able to use advanced magic on her own.
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Ahh yes. That was it.
Knew it had to be something hypocritical.
Tempest Shadow C.Tag is now up!
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Thx^^
Forbidden sex.
Nice work! I really hope to read another chapter!
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Are you going to continue this story?