Can't wait to see where this is going!

Keeping an eye on this! Seriously, the community has slowed down quite a bit over the years, hasn't it? Used to be when a new episode dropped, the place would be FLOODED with artwork, stories, music, and everything in between that it inspired. Things have been remarkably quiet on the movie front. Don't think I've seen a single story yet focused on a character besides Tempest, and even she's only got a dozen or so shorts I've spotted thus for. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. (;

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Tempest is awesome!

Warning! Contains spoilers from the movie, heavy clop and BDSM!
Will also contain my view how Tempest could live in Equestria. Sex is not frequent, but will occasionally happen.

I'm going to read it if it really isn't overdone, it was under clopfic, but I actually want more story in it. So yes if it is what you just said not frequent but it is there, then it should be good enough.

However I will see where it goes, I can handle everything if it is "supposed" to be a clopfic, but as soon as there is a major story plot going on, I get more serious about what themes are used in such a story.

I kind of know where this is supposed to go, but I hope that they both learn to...well get along with each other, but she can keep her dominant behavior and make Twilight listen, that would be something else.

“I think I can understand that… dealing with heat while being alone can be quite bothersome.”

I like that, it seems they can talk about it and kind of keep attention to the whole thing without going nuts and selling themself to every Stallion aviable.

“Not to mention, the apes on this ship are only good for fighting and sticking their stuff into every hole they find,” Tempest snorted before turning, going over to her bed. “I trust that you won’t use your magic and are careful, now come over here.”

Not sure what that meant, but I hope while I find her personality in this story interessting, that she hasn't exactly tried out several of the apes.

While the act alonge can be rather normal, I myself doesn't like to act like that and of course I often hope the characters doesn just take anybody. However a former sentence, makes me belive she did nothing of that sort.

Tempest allowed herself a small grin, knowing full well this was a first for the young alicorn. “I’m surprised you didn’t learn any of this already, with the Princess of Love and the Princess of Night by your side.”

well yeah I don't like to image them like that, but I like it as a joke or any form of insult.

Well I mentioned that I know what I want and what I don't like, maybe I'm a bit picky, but I like how you write and this chapter was okay so far, pretty good actually since I kind of wanted to read her with that personality, I mean where she keeps it and doesn't just turns 100% friendly right away or something.

“I have to study it!”

I have to confess to snickering at 4:30 AM when I read that line. Apologies to my dogs, whose sleep was disturbed.

Never change, Twilight.

At first I was sceptical with it being before the end of the movie, but if you continue this beyond where the movie ended... then yeah... I’d like to see where that goes... even if it doesn’t, I’ll still read this.

Hell Yeah!! \m/

Really hoping you continue this fic

Tempest is great. Makes me wish season 5 had given us her instead of Starlight

“May I ask why you do this? I’m confused in why you would even make such an offer to me,” Twilight asked softly.

Are you doing this*