url address to the original pic you used for this story?

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Just caught that! Oops!

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I edited my comment to remove the spoilers.

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Thanks! I appreciate it!

This looks like it's about to get good!

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Haha, next chapter will be first true clop chapter.

Wow... I love all the humor in this story. You've made me laugh out loud multiple times during this chapter. Well played, good sir.

Still... "Pinkie's special frosting..." This does not jibe with my image of Pinkie. That kind of prank seems more like Rainbow's style.

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Thank you! It's my first time trying some simple humor, so I'm glad I was able to make you chuckle!

Theme music for the second chapter:

his unique[/]

broken italics.

...ok, this is Twi/Shining clopfic but;

I find it difficult to accept that Twilight's libido can only be "jumpstarted" by her BBBFF!
Having said that, great characterisation.

"Heehee! I Thought I was pretty convincing, Luna." Celestia smirked. "Especially when I insisted that these potions could be essential. Hah!"

Bitch.

Chapter 2 - Awkward Discussions A grumpy, tired, lavender coated Alicorn stumbled away from the Canterlot train station. Clearing her bleary eyes after a prolonged yawn, she shambled toward the royal castle, her eyes half-shut and her neck sore.

Some odd spacing issues there.

not even Luna and I have been able to remove his unique[/]

An I for an I tag, aye?

I completely missed any mention of Starlight leaving, so a good portion of the Princesses' conversation was envisioned with Starlight standing in front of them either laughing or looking confused.

"DON'T TELL ME THAT! I didn't need to know that! I'll never be able to get that out of my mind. Gross!*blergh*" Twilight tried to temple-massage the unbidden images of her brother and father's stallion-hoods from her mind, as Starlight's laughter heightened, reaching a choking, breathless level.

So many twists and turns and convoluted tangles of requirements.

"I suppose. In any case, he became a brilliant Wizard partially because of how intricately he would weave the requirements for his spells and potions to require the most... unique ... of reagents from Luna and I. It would take ponies generations to rediscover his work without the complications he wove into his theorems to force some type of sexual service from us... The more powerful ones, not even Luna and I have been able to remove his unique[/] requirements." Celestia chuckled.

Bad ending to the italic tag. The next few paragraphs seem to be italicized as a result.

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I don't think Twilight's libido is the problem. I'm sure she has as many sexual desires as any other mare, but... well... she probably takes care of them solo, if you get my meaning.

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Glad it wasn't just us. Totally expected Starlight to get in on the wager! 😂

Just a heads up, still missing that /i] tag proper. A large chunk of the story is in italycs.
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his unique[/] requirements." Celestia chuckled.
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