I need to actually see rarity's supposed marital arts skills before I believe she's a fighter, not just one or two accidents. on my scale of best to worst mane-six she's ranked last so I feel more bias towards her and any skills or abilities writers have for her.
Noice. I only saw one error. You put "an unicorn" once. "Unicorn" starts with a 'y' sound, like in "you", so you just put 'a unicorn'.
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Thanks for the correction. I'll seek to correct it at once.
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Correction executed at the line where the terms 'an unicorn' appeared.
Thank you again for taking the time to comment.
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No problem, my dude.
Hmm. Intriguing. Though I have further pointers to give for that introduction of yours, if you wish to hear them.
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Well, I'm impressed. You read my work in a record time.
As for your suggestion, I would be interested to hear your thoughts into the matter.
PM is preferable, but feel free to comment here - I am not one who deletes comments.
Nice chapter, good work.
I need to actually see rarity's supposed marital arts skills before I believe she's a fighter, not just one or two accidents. on my scale of best to worst mane-six she's ranked last so I feel more bias towards her and any skills or abilities writers have for her.
Finished but I'm talking a break from the story for a bit