1st!

not a fan of vagrant story per se coz i hate the game not the story!

but nice story though cant wait when they summon iron in equestria!

Keep up the good work, my friend! ^^

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Thanks for the kind words, and I am glad you enjoyed the story so far.

And yes, it will happen on the next chapter.

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Thanks, man. I will.

"Raises fist to the sky" Onwards!!

Still a few hiccups, but nothing massive. I can't wait to see more.

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I know what you mean, I intended to upload the story for approval only, so I could launch this chapter with the editing process done.

It will be updated with the edition done, upon which I invite you to visit again, and see the wonders of a good editor in action.

(n_n) May I meet you later, and I hope that you enjoy the fruit of my labour.

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Eeee~ I love conversing with new writers. Shoot me a message anytime!

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I'll be glad to, if you wish to discuss things about the story itself.

There are also books I can recommend, for writers that wish to improve themselves.

Finished chap

Excellent 1st story keep up the good work and I give this story a 10 out of 11 .

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Oh dear, I didn't receive a notification from your post, dear sir. Apologies for the late reply!

Regarding your post, I thank you for your kind words regarding this first chapter!

I do hope that I can return to this project in the future ... once I've gained a few things to work peacefully with. A stable job, improved health, and a resurgence in energy to type what I envision about this world!