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Thank you for your telling us. I honestly feared that this might be the case. And it makes me pensive.
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I find your suggestions interesting and thank you for your critique on this fic.
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That is true in a way, but still makes me pensive. Maybe we should think a bit on the critique.
I have a question. How long will the story take in "game" years? Are our heroes going to live all the way to the end of the story or will it take generations?
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season 1 is okay if you got to turn this into a game then I just have a few things say. I think there's one thing you need to change I'll see problems in the future the whole thing about you're able to have sex with any age group said you're bringing my human beings into this I think that's something you need to change.I really hope in the next season of the story we see more resistance from the characters I said this before but I always thought the captain was going to kill Sonny or do something to get them back I think you kind of wasted your opportunity with this character but I really did enjoy the story so I am kind of excited for season 2.
This...
This is worse than Fall of Equestria...
It's almost Headless_Rainbow levels of depravity and corruption. (Almost, since it lacks the gore, vore, torture, scat, snuff, necrophilia, literal baby-raping, etc. elements of all his stories. So far.)
It's as if it's hundreds of years in FoE's future, when the Caribou way is the only one left. Not a scrap of resistance remaining. Not only that, it's the ponies themselves who've done it. Celestia's fucking son nonetheless.
Then you take a large assortment of strong females we know, punt them forward in time, and drop them straight into this whole mess and break them one by one in ridiculous ways.
Then, since it's also a Stellaris crossover, the fucking degenerates spread to the stars.
Then, with absolutely minimal effort they promptly corrupt the first sapient race they happen upon, spreading their cancer and showing that this won't have a "good ending" (And guess what? That first species? It's Humanity! Who freely surrender a fellow human being as a sex slave after rutting themselves against a mind-broken and enslaved horse for a week or two.)
Now we just have to "look forward" to them conquering the fucking galaxy.
I honestly hope a Xenophile (Xenophiles are also Egalitarians, they would not be okay with this shit, they hate slavery and unequal rights) Fallen Empire Awakens and crushes them instantly (not the Xenophobe one, they would likely love this shit) or they lose the End-game Crisis. I'm fine with this bastard being devoured by the Prethoryn.
Or, even better, have him invoke "The End of the Cycle" and then be hunted down for slow vengeance as the last living being in the galaxy by the combined Psi/Magic imprints every Psi or Magic capable creature to ever exist in his "Empire."
The Reckoning will come... and it is angry...
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^Pretty much this.
Sunny isn't working for anything so it's just porn logic and porn contrivance that his brains weren't splattered across the nearest surface long ago/at the first good opportunity by either one of the mares, his enemies, his own people, his own mother (or aunt, children, adoptive sister, niece, etc.), the humans, whatever race they met next, etc.
The mares, contrary to how it was initially presented (in that it was just an extremely sexually free/permissive society), are literal property with no purpose or desires beyond fucking and breeding.
How a mare ever even became a Captain is ridiculous seeing their apparent sole purpose in their society and what Sunny does to her for saying "Umm... maybe that's a tad harsh?" AKA: "Guess what? Your extremely high rank (Captain for their first ever starship) is now worthless and you're a broodmare because you are female and questioned my actions once."
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stupid question whats a dead dove. forgive me im not super familiar writitng terms and the like
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Dead Dove: Do Not Eat
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maybe it would help but what i would do is add that in the long description along with saying the basic gist of the story and that if it upsets people then dont read which i guess is the same thing
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After so long of procrastinating, got the description updated. Let's hope this doesn't make others downvote when reading this because they don't like it and push themselves to tell others that they should hate this story just because.
Fucking good man, had a crear time reafing this, now lets wait for season 2