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Lol taking potshots at FOE are we. Funny thing is Sunny claims to be better then them yet he's just as bad if not worse.
I don't like this story. It has no storyline other than sex. It's honestly kind of depressing. You should focus on your other story called Darkness Bathing. At least that story has an overall goal and someone with ambition other than just sex. Also it is always the villain that wins and just reminds me of Fall of Equestria stories. No originality.
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Lol. How to know you've written a bad dark story?
Answer Kefka himself thinks your story is too depressing and your main character too gary stu.
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I absolutely agree. This story is just a sad work of fiction that needs to be scrapped.
There's no true plot or objective In this, sunny, the antagonist, always wins no matter what, there's no sanity withing the mane six, or the other mains whom came along for the ride. Each chapter comes down to one singular end, bad guy wins, girls are sluts.
Do not be affraid to dislike this work of fiction
#DislikeFanfic
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I couldn't have stated it better myself. I've been trying to give this story a chance for a while now, but with each passing chapter I just want to punch Sunny in the face more.
In fact reply to this post if you want to punch Sunny in the face!
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A bit more on the dark side of things than normal but I can see tia actually like that. Though with last few chapters have been like, it’s beginning to head into one of those “Zebra take over the world fics”.
Unlike those that clearly did not read the description I do think that debauchery is all well and good however I do think a bit more personality in the characters and conflict would be nice to make the story more exiting. A Changeling Invasion is a good example were debauchery, story, plot and even a bit of philosophy combined to make a (in my opinion) great story. But you do what you want to do in the end.