8219891 See I know you're right, but I still lokk like an idiot :p you're right, some of it is correct, but the majority is wrong and some translations are just cringy because not only does it stain a great story but doubly so because she's supposed to be french.
But I must agree with you. Nothing against the writer or anything, but if you want to use a foreign language, you must find people who are either fluent in the language themselves or have the education to completely translate.
Loving this so far. As expected, good quality story and build-up with a nice pacing to a great main event. These are the kind of Mature stories I like to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this.
8222018 I offered, being bilingual since childhood and learning to translate since high school, but no reply. And I hate that it looks like I'm being high and mighty and bugging this story about its french and how I could better, but it's just such a shame.
8223546 I completely understand you. i'm a french canadian and i offered help and showed some mistakes in his writing. He replied to me, thanking me but didn't change anything... This story had potential too...
Theories and fears began forming in her mind by the dozen, but she just shook her head. “Non, non. We can’t go to that mare frazzled. We need to be calm and collected. We need to be calm and collected!”
“I’m perfectly calm. You’re the one freaking out,” Sam said, and was ignored.
The princess is already speaking to the leaders of the human world.
...Which ones? American? Chinese? British? Australian? Russian? French? Spanish? Italian? Czech? Korean? Azerbaijani? New Zealander? Japanese? There's so many "leaders" in our world, that just mentioning the word is essentially meaningless without specifying context.
“I didn’t,” Photo replied. “But now I do, and so does Sam.”
Funny thing is that Germans are ...more liberal in matters of sex. sharing a shower is such a minor thing one would not mention it for no one would care. It's something that happens. Showering together to save time so it is like so what. Why do Americans make it so sexual, we are just being efficient and normal people doing normal stuff. Why make it something it is not? Kind of attitude Even if they did have sex no one would care. The embarrassment and overall taboo of sex and even the concept of sex only being private is foreign in germany, and many other European counties. Now I cant speak for germaneigh on the other hand;)
Great chapter, I'm glad I've found this story. It's one of my favourite Fleur de Lis stories, next to J'adore. Btw, I may be wrong but: "“You alright there, Fleur?” the photographer asked, wrapping his arms around her middle as she pressed her back against her chest." Shouldn't it be "his chest"? Also "A blushed worked its way onto Sam’s cheeks." I'm not native but those things kinda stood out
“Give me a moment, and I’d be happy to take you to the door, ma’am,” Svengallop said, before leaping out of his seat, trotting around the table, and pulling Fleur into a hug.
“I’d love to stay and celebrate with you, hon, but I need to go as well,” he said, giving her cheeks a kiss. “But I’d just like you to know that I’m glad you didn’t get rid of your photographer. If it wasn’t for him, we wouldn’t be here now.”
Giggling, Fleur hugged her photographer back. “I wouldn’t be where I am today without you, mon cher.”
10160466 Your comment reminds me of Eurotrip, and them talking about how German TV ads have porn in them. The cutaway to the German orange juice ad that was mostly two women making out, was pretty funny.
Next chapter can't come soon enough. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )
Well then, someone was eager in this chapter.
Please sir, give me more cuteness.
The french in this is all wrong
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"The french in this is all wrong."
But seriously, teasing aside...
Some translations here and there I've noticed are, but not all of them are incorrect, either.
I wonder that myself, sometimes, Sam.
8219891
See I know you're right, but I still lokk like an idiot :p you're right, some of it is correct, but the majority is wrong and some translations are just cringy because not only does it stain a great story but doubly so because she's supposed to be french.
I love this story, easily one of my favorites! Clop with a plot is always a real treat. Especially with such a pretty mare like Fleur.
8221649
Oh no, you don't sound stupid, at all!
But I must agree with you. Nothing against the writer or anything, but if you want to use a foreign language, you must find people who are either fluent in the language themselves or have the education to completely translate.
When will they have real sex?
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I do... Seriously, sometimes there's something missing. Gotta give 'er catsup.
Loving this so far. As expected, good quality story and build-up with a nice pacing to a great main event. These are the kind of Mature stories I like to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this.
8222018
I offered, being bilingual since childhood and learning to translate since high school, but no reply. And I hate that it looks like I'm being high and mighty and bugging this story about its french and how I could better, but it's just such a shame.
8223546
I completely understand you. i'm a french canadian and i offered help and showed some mistakes in his writing. He replied to me, thanking me but didn't change anything...
This story had potential too...
Too ruthless!
Ponies in the human world? They will have a rude awakening!
Holy shit that mare is HUNGRY!!! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )
In a world without ponies? And the first one to go over is a fashion model? Makes one scratch their head, proverbially.
cough
Well that got saucy.
Ah! But it's that little bit at the end though! That's what does it.
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Woooo! Finally porn at last!
The only reason I came!
C'est la vie en effet.
...Which ones? American? Chinese? British? Australian? Russian? French? Spanish? Italian? Czech? Korean? Azerbaijani? New Zealander? Japanese?
There's so many "leaders" in our world, that just mentioning the word is essentially meaningless without specifying context.
Funny thing is that Germans are ...more liberal in matters of sex. sharing a shower is such a minor thing one would not mention it for no one would care. It's something that happens. Showering together to save time so it is like so what. Why do Americans make it so sexual, we are just being efficient and normal people doing normal stuff. Why make it something it is not? Kind of attitude Even if they did have sex no one would care. The embarrassment and overall taboo of sex and even the concept of sex only being private is foreign in germany, and many other European counties. Now I cant speak for germaneigh on the other hand;)
Не смешите мои подковы! Это что все? И ни каких более чувственных занятий кроме как держать за хвост и магией за член?
Great chapter, I'm glad I've found this story. It's one of my favourite Fleur de Lis stories, next to J'adore.
Btw, I may be wrong but:
"“You alright there, Fleur?” the photographer asked, wrapping his arms around her middle as she pressed her back against her chest."
Shouldn't it be "his chest"?
Also "A blushed worked its way onto Sam’s cheeks."
I'm not native but those things kinda stood out
Shouldn't that be manager?
10160466
Your comment reminds me of Eurotrip, and them talking about how German TV ads have porn in them.
The cutaway to the German orange juice ad that was mostly two women making out, was pretty funny.