Get an editor or use Grammarly. Please. You're killing me.

8144113 I guess working on it till morning didn't help either. just today I noticed a lot of errors, but I don't know if unpublish this chapter will be the right thing to do. Either way, I'm going to search for an editor again, hope I have some luck this time.

so a deus ex machina for spike

nice

btw you should also proofread this chapter as it has alot of errors

Spike was right there on the ground, grasping for his dear life, his little body being engulfed between pink fur and hair, "help. me!" he shouted with the last bit of air his lungs had before he paced out into the sweet embrace of death.

‘I think you were meant to say: 'the sweet embrace of the party pony!' Pinkie pie corrected the narrator.

"Pinkie could you please not kill my dragon? It’s only mid-day for Celestia's sake" Twilight asked annoyed.

"Oh, sorry," Pinkie released her grip on the little dragon "It's just that Spike told us something real nice, I think no one had ever told me something so nice in my life, and he is so sweet and little and mushy and kind that I couldn't help myself and I started to hug him and kiss him and snuggle him, and because of it the narrator got confused, and then I tell Spike how much I love him and then again-"

🙂: Pinkie?

: Yes?

🙂: How many times do I have to tell you... I am the narrator, so I decide what happens. I cannot get "confused" about my story, since it's MY story. Also, stop breaking the fourth wall. Do you have any idea how much it costs to get the fourth wall repaired? It's not like fixing a physical wall. You have to shove millions upon millions of doughnuts into the thing to fix the cracks. It's hard getting my hands that many doughnuts! It's not like you can walk into any random doughnut store and say "I'll take a few million doughnuts".

: You can fix fourth walls with doughnuts? Well, why didn't you say so?! I've have those doughnuts for you likety-split!

🙂: I need real doughnuts, not fictitious doughnuts. I can't just take doughnuts from the world that broke the fourth wall and use them to fix the wall. That's not how it works. If I tired that, the entire universe would explode.

: Aw, man!

(Pinkie Pie's face then returned to it's normal hyper-active smile as she began eating the impossibly-large quantity of doughnuts that she somehow managed to bake instantaneously. As hard as it was to believe she was able to make that many doughnuts that quickly, it was even harder to believe she was able to eat every single one of them. Do you know what was even harder to believe than her saiyan-like stomach capacity? The speed at which she ate all those doughnuts. I couldn't see her moving all that well, since she was naught but a pink blur, but I think she unhinged her jaw and ate all of them in one go. She didn't even have to stop and chew!)

: *buurrrp*