"She is my best friend, the figure i look up to even more than my mother, I know her more than anyone else... how I wish I knew everything from the beginning"
Interesting. I wonder if the more frequent he is having his erotic dreams will start to effect him in the real world? I mean you keep dreaming about someone and you doing erotic things to them you will start to get effected when you are around them for real. And Twi banking on this would go far to make sure that inner breast in him in awakened. Maybe even flashing him her marehood to get him going lol. I wonder does she want to be the dom in their relationship all the time or does she want to see him take charge sometime as well? I do wonder as well, it seems that ALL the girls have the wrong idea about Spike's age? I mean they all see him as a kid when in truth he is really in his late teens. The age gap between him and the girl is nowhere near as big as they all think it is. Which I wonder does how they treat him bug him when he is much older than they think and far more mature than even most of the girls?
8138795 Spike, is quite the strong character when it comes to controlling his instincts and behavior, that's something that will come to play in future chapters. by the meantime for his urges, well having this kind of release of stress so often can peace him out easily.
to this point, there is almost a clear view of twilight's perspective, including something she doesn't know but Spike- kind of - does. So the next chapter will also have Spike as the main event. The only thing I need is time to add more scenes and a proper environment to express his development.
8144302 No need to unpublish, you can work on it on the integrated editor. And I advise taking your time. Don't rush or push yourself when writing. Trust me, it comes out better that way.
Ohhhh naught
Very Kinky
Interesting. I wonder if the more frequent he is having his erotic dreams will start to effect him in the real world? I mean you keep dreaming about someone and you doing erotic things to them you will start to get effected when you are around them for real. And Twi banking on this would go far to make sure that inner breast in him in awakened. Maybe even flashing him her marehood to get him going lol. I wonder does she want to be the dom in their relationship all the time or does she want to see him take charge sometime as well? I do wonder as well, it seems that ALL the girls have the wrong idea about Spike's age? I mean they all see him as a kid when in truth he is really in his late teens. The age gap between him and the girl is nowhere near as big as they all think it is. Which I wonder does how they treat him bug him when he is much older than they think and far more mature than even most of the girls?
8138795 Spike, is quite the strong character when it comes to controlling his instincts and behavior, that's something that will come to play in future chapters. by the meantime for his urges, well having this kind of release of stress so often can peace him out easily.
to this point, there is almost a clear view of twilight's perspective, including something she doesn't know but Spike- kind of - does. So the next chapter will also have Spike as the main event. The only thing I need is time to add more scenes and a proper environment to express his development.
8144302 No need to unpublish, you can work on it on the integrated editor. And I advise taking your time. Don't rush or push yourself when writing. Trust me, it comes out better that way.
Other than that, I'm liking the story a lot.