Desc. gave me cancer. Story.... can be... i am not really into clopfics but i guess its good?
Still, try to work on that desc.

I like it! The storytelling is very direct, but not in a bad way! You've told us everything we need to know to get started on this ride. I'm buckling in, hope it's a good one!

8047789 what the fuck is up with all the dislikes?

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No idea. I guess some people don't appreciate fail trolling. I'm not even that bothered by it. The ratio speaks for itself.

Very promising. Do continue.

From the day I could walk, I learned to hunt. From the day I learned to talk, I learned to deceive. From the day my body could become aroused, I learned to fuck.

Straight to business, it seems. No fooling around here.

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Thanks, PonyDragon. That's kinda the point. There's what's explicit, and then there's what's implicit. Don't take everything Chrysalis says at face value.

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New chappy coming online soon!

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Thanks, High. I got more coming in very shortly.

Before I read this, what is the Dake tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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Not grimdark. It's an exploration into a character who is fundamentally dark. Y'know, with the whole enslaving, antisocial, invading, warmongering, and manipulating stuff. The darkness is more in the implications than directly stated.

It really comes down to what one I considers the word "clean" to mean, and whether being such is valuable.