After being shown the wonders of generosity by her friend Rarity, Coco Pommel goes out of her way to help somepony in need. He repays her in ways she hadn't expected.
Coco is probably going to have the mother of all hangovers in the morning. And we still have to deal with Prime opening that letter and Rarity showing up.
I raised an eyebrow at her, "I wasn't aware you could handle alcohol." She burst into giggles as she waved her legs in the air spontaneously, "I can't!"
A-bucking-dorable.
A good portrayal of drunken Coco, honestly, and before I get into the deep meat of the chapter, I would have been more interest to hear how she tasted, verses just hearing that here lips were soft.
This was a great step for Prime. The amount of restraint shown in this chapter is almost dumbfoundedly noble that I had a smile on my face for the rest of the chapter. Way to show character growth man, really
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The next chapter is going to be the longest one, complete with an epilogue as well.
Sorry, but all good things must come to an end, and I may revitalize that characters in this story for later use if I'm feeling up for it.
Will read... eventually...
FORESHADOWING!!!
Coco is probably going to have the mother of all hangovers in the morning. And we still have to deal with Prime opening that letter and Rarity showing up.
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Despite her sounding quite drunk, she didn't actually drink much at all.
She's a bit of a lightweight.
Update tomorrow, probably.
A-bucking-dorable.
A good portrayal of drunken Coco, honestly, and before I get into the deep meat of the chapter, I would have been more interest to hear how she tasted, verses just hearing that here lips were soft.
This was a great step for Prime. The amount of restraint shown in this chapter is almost dumbfoundedly noble that I had a smile on my face for the rest of the chapter. Way to show character growth man, really