Since the dawn of ponykind, ponies have looked up at the sky, wondering what may lie beyond the distant stars. They had hoped for riches and knowledge beyond comprehension. Instead, they had found humanity, or rather, humanity had found them.
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Conflicts of the past, huh?....
Interesting
7986238 Yup, I'm all over the place!
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It would actually be be United Earth Republic
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It's part of Star Citizen lore. It used to be the United Nations of Earth (Or something like that), then an emperor gained control and changed the name, and then it turned into a republic while maintaining the name.
For a first story it is not too bad. Some similar sounding words used in place of others but not bad.
I think in terms of constructive criticism you might try to utilize less of the time and date stamps for that part of the story and just allow those sections of the story to come together more naturally via the characters perspective.
I like the initial story-telling, especially since I have never heard of the two... stories? Books? Movies?, that create the crossover.
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They’re videogames. Sci-fi MMOs to be exact.