Since the dawn of ponykind, ponies have looked up at the sky, wondering what may lie beyond the distant stars. They had hoped for riches and knowledge beyond comprehension. Instead, they had found humanity, or rather, humanity had found them.
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German?
He speaks german
That is unexpected
But... if he got blasted a bit by magic, shouldn't that have aggravated his wounds to the point of him crying out in pain?
8010594 Actually, it was supposed to resemble Dutch, but now that I look at it again, it does look an awfull lot like German! But that's just what it sounds like to the ponies. He is actually speaking English. Also, the blast was more of a push, rather than an explosion of sorts. It hurts a bit, but he's fine.
8010697 and... what do the ponies speak?
8010714 Equestrian. I'll probably get into more detail in the next chapter(s), but for now, just know that they have no idea what the other is saying!
I like this story, I do really! But the last few chapters, this one especially was kinda rushed to me. Not only that but the characters seem to disobey their own orders. For example solar told his squad to hold up by the trees, instead they just Kinda walked right up to the craft without shorting a flare like they were supposed too once the craft was found, in real life they would have done it by observing the craft with binoculars while shooting a flare to alert the others, don't mean to sound like I'm flaming it's just my thoughts on the matter. Xd
Blaze just walked up on him? Where was the human? If he was laying down like in the previous chapter shouldn't that have been mentioned during the contact? The chapters are just Kinda lacking in these details and quality is what I'm trying to say.
I like the story very much and am going to continue on with the next chapters!
Also I'm pretty sure at the end he said "I come in peace!"
Lol
Didn't have to look that up if it was in another language. Xd