actually well written, minus some minor typos... I actually want to see where this goes. Try not to have clop every chapter? lol. I tend to skip over clop. Tracking
This is going to get really good I can tell. Well written and though her real character would never let her self get into this kind of situation I do like where the first chapter took us.
I think this is supposed to be mainly a Clopfic, but since Fluttershys Personality doesn´t seems completely messed up and she only got more brave while drinking the cider, I would really like this story to continue and get a real story.
I'm never a fan of stories where the human is turned into a pony as soon as they enter it, but I guess it can't hurt to try.
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Thank you for agreeing with me!
good
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lel
But seriously though, nice story.
Good thus far.
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The funniest thing is that I almost used this as the cover image.
Thanks for all the feedback. The second part is almost done.
actually well written, minus some minor typos... I actually want to see where this goes. Try not to have clop every chapter? lol. I tend to skip over clop. Tracking
This is going to get really good I can tell. Well written and though her real character would never let her self get into this kind of situation I do like where the first chapter took us.
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Still enjoyed it, though...
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Huh...need to look over for those typos.
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interesting.......
'Evergreen forest'... I was that close to leave this fanfic when I read that.
pretty good clop if i say\y so myself kinda funny to think of fluttershy as the type to just give herself up after a drink but w/e
I think this is supposed to be mainly a Clopfic, but since Fluttershys Personality doesn´t seems completely messed up and she only got more brave while drinking the cider, I would really like this story to continue and get a real story.