This is a very interesting story. On the surface it looks like an average sort of clop, two ponies get enslaved, owner gets his rocks off. Yet here there is a different dynamic. Rubinstein is a jerk here, but he's not a completely sadistic bastard. He has guilt and he is uncomfortable with some of what has happened, and yet he is also very happy and excited. This mix of emotions makes him far more unique then some generic rapist bastard. Then there's Fluttershy and Rainbow.
Fluttershy it seems has a hidden side, a fetish of being a slave or at least being dominated to some degree. It doesn't seem to be some intense BDSM thing, but she is definitely a submissive. As the story has progressed and things have escalated, she went from completely nervous to slowly excited, until she was completely confident and in her element. n contrast, Rainbow seems to hate the situation she is in completely, and is looking for any option to escape she can. But she also seems to slowly adjusted a little. She is rageful and doesn't want to be involved, but she has also seemed to realise she is stuck like this for the long run. How much is straight up anger, and how much is anger hiding nerves I can't tell, but there seems to be more to her feelings here then she has so far let on.
Overall, this is a story with a lot of potential and interesting directions. I can't wait to see more.
This is a very interesting story. On the surface it looks like an average sort of clop, two ponies get enslaved, owner gets his rocks off. Yet here there is a different dynamic. Rubinstein is a jerk here, but he's not a completely sadistic bastard. He has guilt and he is uncomfortable with some of what has happened, and yet he is also very happy and excited. This mix of emotions makes him far more unique then some generic rapist bastard. Then there's Fluttershy and Rainbow.
Fluttershy it seems has a hidden side, a fetish of being a slave or at least being dominated to some degree. It doesn't seem to be some intense BDSM thing, but she is definitely a submissive. As the story has progressed and things have escalated, she went from completely nervous to slowly excited, until she was completely confident and in her element. n contrast, Rainbow seems to hate the situation she is in completely, and is looking for any option to escape she can. But she also seems to slowly adjusted a little. She is rageful and doesn't want to be involved, but she has also seemed to realise she is stuck like this for the long run. How much is straight up anger, and how much is anger hiding nerves I can't tell, but there seems to be more to her feelings here then she has so far let on.
Overall, this is a story with a lot of potential and interesting directions. I can't wait to see more.