The first human pony in 200 years, Gregory Grimory has been given a great responsibility by the queens, one they say could shape the future of Equestria.
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Okay, this story seems interesting. A human who has become a new sub species of pony and appears in the future of the show with grown up characters. Hope to see more of this story.
7558170 With enough comments like this, you hopefully will.
I feel like the main draw of your writing for me is the characters/interaction. You do interesting things with them but they don't feel like they've been forced into their roles.
This seems interesting I shall follow and see where it leads.
7558437 That's appreciated, but isn't "not feeling forced" a good thing?
7558449 Here's hoping you find something worthwhile.
7558472 I meant it as a good thing. I'm not very eloquent.
Interesting. Very interesting.
7561070 Appreciated.
I must confess, I'm a little worried about this talk of his genes being so superior to those of regular, inferior ponies. Sounds just a bit master race-ish, you know? Now, they're not talking about herren- and unterponies yet, but... well. You get the idea.
Not going to comment on the Canterlot Nobles Are Talking Roadblocks To Everything Good And Wholesome trope.
7565122 Is that what people are disliking about this story, the premise?
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It might very well be. As you can see, there's some very uncomfortable Unfortunate Implications to be drawn from the story's description. Now, I can't actually speak for those folks who did give you a dislike (for the record, I didn't), but that would be my best guess.
7566382 Your honesty is most appreciated. Any suggestions on improving at least the description?
blueblood not an ass interesting
that is a very oddly worded sentence. it feels like foreshadowing that celestia and luna are not telling the truth and just want to turn them.
also queen celestia and luna? the reason the show uses princesses is not just for toys. there cant be more then one queen, but there can be any number of princesses. this gets around the whole royalty title thing.
i usually dont like hooman turned into pony but this one intrigued me so ill give her a crack.
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It wasn't intended to be that ominous. It's just that life or death isn't much of a choice when you get down to it. Also, the 2 queens thing is a human rule, not a pony one.
when i read "he was bent" i immediately thought blue blood meant he had a bent penis.
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... Thank you for sharing.