Hey everyone, MatCor1337 here, and I'd like to inform you about some of my plans for this Fic because... I'm stuck. Not stuck in that I can't continue the story, mind you; far from it! There's just some key elements that I don't know how to implement in a way that works. The first is the main subject of the chapter I'm currently writing: the Unification Wars. I want it to be so that the Emperor finds Twilight when battling the second techno-barbarian nation-state (as if they're on a list), but I don't know what order to have the conquests be in. I can't just say something like, "after Twilight became fully committed to the Emperor and the Imperium, she travelled with her new Lord across the world, conquering nation-state after nation-state over the course of several years until none remained, sealing Terra under the Emperor's rule as plans for the rebuilding of the hive-world were underway." That's just lazy and boring, and I don't want that. So I plan to have an actual list of the nation-states and number them in the order of which they'll be conquered, even if some will only be referenced. I'm mentioning this because I'd be very grateful if you could all help me figure out the order of which the Emperor conquered the nation-states (link to the Wikia page).The second is in regards to my last comment in the previous chapter. All we know is that the Emperor used a strand of his own DNA as the foundation of the Pramarch gene-stock, with the belief that he also used psychic sorcery to enhance them spiritually, but that's about it. But with Twilight and Rainbow in the picture, having done many achievements during the Unification Wars to become highly respected individuals and even become close friends to the Emperor, things would be different. What exactly happens will be revealed at the start of the "Great Crusade" chapter, but the result is that the two become the biological mothers of 10 Primarchs each. The ones that I am locking-in and sticking with are as follows:
Twilight Sparkle;
Horus
Vulkan
Roboute Guilliman
Magnus the Red
Konrad Curze
VoltaireRainbow Dash;
Leman Russ
Jove Procheli
Sanguinius
Lorgar
Jaghatai Khan
Angron
Those listed above were somewhat simple to place, but I'm stumped with the others. But don't worry, that's where YOU come in! I'm asking for your help to keep this story rolling by telling me which Primarch you believe fits with which mother, and maybe add why you think so. There are a few points I should mention though: 1. Primarchs with rivalries cannot have the same mother; I want to use Twilight and Rainbow's growing relationship as a conduit(?) to settle their differences and bridge whatever gaps lay between them, which I think will work better if both have someone they may look up to encouraging them to get along. 2. The Loyalist/Traitor ratio must be AS EVEN AS POSSIBLE, meaning one cannot have all Loyalists and the other all Traitors. 3. Exceptions to the previous Points may be made if the Primarch shares most/all of their mother's traits, I wasn't aware of it, or a very strong case(reason) was given.
Before I finish, I'd like to thank you all for the support and input you've given me since I've finally started posting my Fics. If you haven't already, check out my other stories (or don't, your choice) and give me your honest opinion on them. New ideas and plans for making my own spin on existing stories may come, so keep an eye out. Anyway, that's all from me, and I hope to hear from you. MatCor1337 out.
I may be able to help, but note that i have college to go to. I'm usually in college starting at 10am - 3pm on monday, 9am - 3pm on tuesday and wednesday and 8am - 3pm on thursday and 8am - 2pm on friday. My timezone is gmt +2 in finland. I don't have access to my computer in the weekends. I also have only very basic and very limited and small knowledge in WH40K, star wars and halo.
I can try to help but i'm not sure how much i could help...
So is there any possibility for me to be of any sort of assistance?
I do want to try and help if i can...
I may not have the experience but i do have the eagerness to at least try to help in any way i can.
And now i await your answer.
From an avid reader and a person who likes the story a lot,
Wild Balance
i would help but i dont knew anything about the lore of warhammer 40k,
7643846 I have a link to the "Unification Wars" wikia page in there. Just read a bit of that.
7643868 perturabo would make a good son for twilight
Ok... You talk about RD and Twilight, but... there Spike?
i can kind of see the all the sons and maybe rest of the empire call twilight and dash something like "Sacred Mothers" because of they role and such,
7655921 Great idea!!! At first I thought of using something like "Grand Duchess" or whatever, but that is MUCH better! I'm gonna use that and give you all the credit.
7663798 thank you and why do i have feeling some of their son are a over proctive of them while other are not and the over proctive one are going to invade equis to get them back.....
great story i cant wait for more,
btw where spike
7655921 AND be very high up in the chain of command
as for 7647225 question i would think spike would be the guardian (like protector kind of guardian like the ones you would see in fantasy type temples)
or be the leader of their personal guards like captain of the guards type stuff
as for me i would think the god emperor adopted them as his own children or make them very high ranked nobles and used their genes to make the Primarchs :derpytongue2
PS. if one of those were true I WOULD KISS YOU MATCOR! (on the cheek e.e NO HOMO)
7672260 i think spike is a jedi master,
7672530 LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!! XD HEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAH
7672875 yeap that what I think as well, but what type of jedi would he be, ie rank and such and would he have a his own ship??
7672260 oh I think they be right under the emperor in turn of power, most likely have they own guard, and flagship and they escort ship is a whole sector fleet but I can so see both of them going to the emperor say "ok we hello create 10 son each how about we try again for a daughter or two..."
7665010 After thinking about it for a bit, I can see Konrad being a little protective of Twilight as they'll form a bond over the Crusade, and maybe Russ and Angron for Rainbow. Either way, if anything happens to their mothers, they're gonna be PISSED.
7672260
He 'harvests' their ovaries and fertilises them with His genes.
No spoilers to Spike's role though; love it or hate it, I want THAT to be a surprise.
(there should be a "sly grin" emote, it would really fit above)
7675147 MR. Popo show up "Alright maggots, listen up. Popo's about to teach you the Pecking Order. It goes: you, the dirt, the Primarch, Sacred Mothers [Twilight and Rainbow], Emperor of Mankind, then Popo. Any questions?"
well I hope for new chapter sometime in the next 8,376,0000 hrs,
So when the next chapter going to be out yet?
So what the different between original warhammer 40k universe and this one with twilight rainbow and spike?
Well, seeing as Primarchs with rivalries can't have the same mother, Lion El'jonson is Twilight's son.
You lost me at the homophobia in Equestria, the land of love and tolerance. Also for the Unification Wars start in the nation-state where the emperor revealed himself and work outwards.
7706535 I completely understand how you may feel about that, I want to use an idea I saw from another fic called Then We Run (I think it's Then) where Twilight and Rainbow get together, but everyone hates/betrays them except for Applejack and Pinkie. I also want to have it that Celestia has secretly manipulated the ponies' views on some topics behind the scenes over the generations to what SHE thinks is ethical or not. Even if you're uncomfortable with the topic, I can only ask that you see the next chapter before leaving this story forever. What Celestia (and a particular, thick-headed stallion) does with this info is VERY important to Equestria's fate once the Imperium comes knocking.
Also, from your other comment, who's Jonson's rival?
7710592 Leman Russ
Despite their common loyalties to the Imperium Space Marine Chapters do not always get along. Rivalries bound to develop over the millennia surface from domain rivalries and more come to pass dividing those that once stood together. Once such rivalry, ancient in its origin, exists between the Space Wolves and Dark Angels Chapters. While the origin of this rivalry has long since passed into legend there are two widely accepted accounts of its birth.
1. The first is of the Space Wolves chapter themselves. The chapter claims that it began during the Horus Heresy when the two Chapters were in campaign together. Legend says that Lion El'Jonson, Primarch of the Dark Angels, advanced his legion without coordinating with his allies. Though his action swiftly won the battle a great many of the Space Wolves were slain with their flank left unprotected to the enemy's counter-attack. After the conflict the Wolf challenged the Lion to a duel. The battle lasted until both warriors collapsed from exhaustion swearing vengeance upon one another. Over the years it is said that the two developed a mutual respect for one another, but due to their pride both felt honor-bound to fulfill their vows of vengeance.
2. During a pacification war, the Dark Angels aided the Space Wolves against a particular planet. This planetary leader had insulted Leman Russ's honor and so he wanted to defeat the leader personally for the insult. The Dark Angels and Space Wolves, both led by their respective Primarchs, assaulted the tower where the leader was. Leman Russ burst into the throne room just in time to see Lion El'Jonson beheading the leader. Angry that the honor was not his, Leman Russ marched up to the Lion and punched him in the jaw. This led to a battle that lasted a week or more, until finally Russ saw how immature their squabble was and started laughing. Lion El'Jonson took this as Russ mocking him and breaking the honour of Single Combat, knocked Russ unconscious before escaping the planet with his legion. The Space Wolves considered this an offence believing El'Jonson to be a coward.
Regardless of its origin the two Legions (and their subsequent Chapters) have never forgotten their feud and tensions run high between them. Though the Chapters have fought together on many occasions the vows made by their progenitors long ago have resulted in customary duels between them. It has come to pass that each time the Chapters meet two champions are selected from both sides to engage in a (usually) non-lethal duel.
Under Russ' brash leadership the Space Wolves had other incidents with their allied Astartes Legion. This included the Night of the Wolf against the World Eaters and a brief bloody confrontation on Ark Reach Secundus with the Thousand Sons. It was also hinted that the Space Wolves, serving as the Emperor's executioners, may have had something to do with the disappearance of the Two Lost Legions.
Also which one is Empress and which one is a concubine?
7711408 If you're asking what I think you're asking, neither Twilight nor Rainbow become an Empress. Their titles consist of Sacred Mothers (credit goes to Eshiraith Malyra) and maybe Brides of the Emperor, but the latter is only in title. They and Spike become close friends to the Emperor, and He would trust His life and the Imperium with them if He had to.
What's kind of space marines do twilight and rainbow going to get in their life's in warhammer 40k universe?
And do their get weapons and wargears too?
7713181 So basically, they are Malcador?
7713320 They'll definitely get their own bodyguards, like the Custodes for the Emperor, that I'm considering to call the Shadowbolts and give them the same black, dark-purple and yellow colour scheme. Though I don't know if they should be a regular Space Marine Chapter or repainted Custodes.
7713838 Pretty much.
7715234 How about Sisters of Battle?
7715234 do they get both same bodyguards with shadowbolts colors or the one with shadowbolts colors for rainbow dash when twilight own bodyguards has different colors?
7715234 and also you not answer this comment the other day?
7700246
7715241 s/he was talking to me.
7717440 That's what PM's are for, otherwise it's open game on replies.
7717557 right...
7715266 They both have the Shadowbolts as their bodyguards. As for your other comment 7700246 , very few Primarchs/Legions turn traitor.
7715241 Though not augmented to the same extent (i.e. huge stature and bulging muscles) they'll technically become akin to female Space Marines and be part of the actual Legion/Chapter.
7717977 Well, seeing as you just admitted that you are going to create female Astartes why not have the Shadowbolts be Female volunteers from the different loyalist Legions/chapters (depending on if the Codex Astartes broke up the legions in this story) or be female Custodes.
7718527 .........huh, never thought of that. The "female Custodes" part, that is. I had thought of having some Astartes from the various Legions being transferred to the Shadowbolts with it being viewed as one of if not THE greatest honour one can achieve (examples being Captain Titus and Commander Dante), but now I'm considering your suggestion.
7720546
So a cross between Death Watch and the Wolfblade.
7721690 Basically.
7721690 what is a wolfblade?
7725527 http://warhammer40k.wikia.com/wiki/Wolfblade
7725688 thank.
me can see in a future chapter lots of ship come to planet for rainbow and twilight, with enough firepower to blow the planet and everyone on it to dust and army back up the firepower.......
Okay, I haven't read much on the spoilers so I have little to no Idea what your story is about, I am though interested and would like for you to continue.
When the next chapter going to be out yet?
7777676 I with you, when will next chapter be out
7777676 Honestly not sure myself; I'm a little stuck on the first interactions between Twilight and Malcador, and I've been sidetracked by other fanfics. All I can say is thank you for supporting me, I'll write up the next chapter when I can, and post it when I can
7781457 who is Malcador?
7784260 something to do with warhammer 40k, I think they like the 2nd in command of the human race, like a regent, or something of that sorts,
7781457 that good, I would say let spike fill that role but I have feeling u got other plans for spike