Hey everyone, MatCor1337 here, and I'd like to inform you about some of my plans for this Fic because... I'm stuck. Not stuck in that I can't continue the story, mind you; far from it! There's just some key elements that I don't know how to implement in a way that works. The first is the main subject of the chapter I'm currently writing: the Unification Wars. I want it to be so that the Emperor finds Twilight when battling the second techno-barbarian nation-state (as if they're on a list), but I don't know what order to have the conquests be in. I can't just say something like, "after Twilight became fully committed to the Emperor and the Imperium, she travelled with her new Lord across the world, conquering nation-state after nation-state over the course of several years until none remained, sealing Terra under the Emperor's rule as plans for the rebuilding of the hive-world were underway." That's just lazy and boring, and I don't want that. So I plan to have an actual list of the nation-states and number them in the order of which they'll be conquered, even if some will only be referenced. I'm mentioning this because I'd be very grateful if you could all help me figure out the order of which the Emperor conquered the nation-states (link to the Wikia page).The second is in regards to my last comment in the previous chapter. All we know is that the Emperor used a strand of his own DNA as the foundation of the Pramarch gene-stock, with the belief that he also used psychic sorcery to enhance them spiritually, but that's about it. But with Twilight and Rainbow in the picture, having done many achievements during the Unification Wars to become highly respected individuals and even become close friends to the Emperor, things would be different. What exactly happens will be revealed at the start of the "Great Crusade" chapter, but the result is that the two become the biological mothers of 10 Primarchs each. The ones that I am locking-in and sticking with are as follows:
Twilight Sparkle;
Horus
Vulkan
Roboute Guilliman
Magnus the Red
Konrad Curze
VoltaireRainbow Dash;
Leman Russ
Jove Procheli
Sanguinius
Lorgar
Jaghatai Khan
Angron
Those listed above were somewhat simple to place, but I'm stumped with the others. But don't worry, that's where YOU come in! I'm asking for your help to keep this story rolling by telling me which Primarch you believe fits with which mother, and maybe add why you think so. There are a few points I should mention though: 1. Primarchs with rivalries cannot have the same mother; I want to use Twilight and Rainbow's growing relationship as a conduit(?) to settle their differences and bridge whatever gaps lay between them, which I think will work better if both have someone they may look up to encouraging them to get along. 2. The Loyalist/Traitor ratio must be AS EVEN AS POSSIBLE, meaning one cannot have all Loyalists and the other all Traitors. 3. Exceptions to the previous Points may be made if the Primarch shares most/all of their mother's traits, I wasn't aware of it, or a very strong case(reason) was given.
Before I finish, I'd like to thank you all for the support and input you've given me since I've finally started posting my Fics. If you haven't already, check out my other stories (or don't, your choice) and give me your honest opinion on them. New ideas and plans for making my own spin on existing stories may come, so keep an eye out. Anyway, that's all from me, and I hope to hear from you. MatCor1337 out.