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death is not good or evil death is needed to keep balance
GRAMMAR BOI!
Grammer died in the making of this story. A moment of silence plese. Thak yu,
If you want help with grammar I am available
7608130 .. temped to correct the yu...
Dude you need an editor badly fix this along with the pacing and your good.
Whoa, whoa whoa, why so much grammar problems? O_o Being son of death doesn't give you rights to write like shit, sorry but truth hurts.
Euuugh... I Caaaaan't.... this could beee reaaaaallly good... but the grammar?... OH GAD... KILLL MEEEE...
Start over from the beginning with a high tier beta.
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the grammar does not bother me that much but the formatting is getting to me a little. does the formatting get better as it goes?
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Yes
I can see he’s the son of death because he reap the fuck out of grammar.
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Ok that was good
. . . . . I'm tempted to call the FBI. The reason? Because of the sheer amount of crack in this story.
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Thats new, but also kinda funny
lol
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me too