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Seriously man you need an editor to check your chapters, some serious editing is needed but other than that the chapter is good and i know how you feel about not knowing how to show a whole video
You definitely need a editor or you really need to go back over the story and correct the mistakes.Other than that I get so absorbed into the story that it doesn't even matter and that means the story is good.Besides I read so many stories that have little to no editing,so I'm used to it.
A horse riding a horse
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Yeah, not my best work 😂