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This chapter...every thing that is wrong with this fic has just been summed up with a description of light corruption.
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Wonderful! Now, let's not be vague. Critique correctly please.
I thought Whitney was a first name for girls.
9140581 Celestia is clearly been corrupted by light and thinks it's best to stick to a show made to entertain 7 year old girls for making plans.
Your MC thinks he messes everything up and uses this as excuse to be a whiny bitch and shy away from real problems like how erasing the bearers memory is a sign of said corruption.
And you sir are using this the events of the cartoon as a means to not think about how consequences of the MC's actions will affect events around him and that's just lazy.
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Correct. But also as a somewhat rare last name.
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Perhaps. Or maybe youre overthinking it and asuming tgat certain things wont happen. I have every major event planned out. You seem a bit impatient, so perhaps you should come back when I finish. Itll take a year, see you! I am glad you spent so much time analyzing my fic though. Thanks
His early control is impressive.
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Overconfidence is a slow and insidious killer.
dude the shadow being could have been a xenomorph dude they are horrific
This chapter was wild.