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Eh this Equestria seems to be much darker than we are used to.... Speciest's, Failed experiments and deadly ''speak and be killed'' magics that Obsidian oh so casually made to Devon, Rarity being some spec op bs and much more that just doesent seem fitting.......
I'll continue reading but short chapters with alot of things even if small being twisted is a bit concerning as I personally can stomach almost any story unless it is a gore horror or ''make one of mane6 killer'' sort of deal.. This is getting abit of a stretch for how im seeing it.
7990076 Thanks for your input. I plan on making this long and drawn out. There will be timeskips in the future for mundane things such as the short week of training beforehand. I will try and provide more interesting and longer chapters however. I do want to start making 2k+ chapters that will make everyone feel satisfied.
Life in Equestria isn't so much different from life on Earth. Evil lurks in everyone, especially those with power and prestige.
Obsidian is a terrible guard. Aside from the geas, she has completely failed to protect her charge on two separate occasions due to her absence.
The geas, of course, is mind bogglingly stupid all around. I can only hope she's lying about it being fatal, because if not then she effectively signed a suicide pact.
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I suppose youre right. She kinda sucks as a guardian.
I love that this chapter has the first meeting of Sweetie.