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Nice subtle reference there.
spoilers.
8481340
Had to. I love pie.
Aww geeze. What is Devan up to?
8481647
Yes, it did. I do as well.
8502017
That's nothing! I'm close to 5,000 for chapter 1 of a story I am writing let me tell ya it's not easy writing 5,000 words lots of writers block got in the way followed by lack of motivation but I am almost done with chapter 1 chapter 2 is going to be another war of words though (figuratively speaking of course)
8502015
you didn't answer the question. I have seen this in other stories however it the princess that tells the main character he cant go home the only other way the main oc could never return home is if the planet he lived on no longer could sustain life by war or worst case scenario the planet was destroyed by a black hole. That is just a few examples but like he says
its almost as if he knows he can return but only says that to stay in equestria, don't get me wrong I would too. However in a way this gives me the impression its in sense a cop out this character feels weak in structure I would highly encourage you seek out an editor/ prereader for this story. If I had to rate this story from where I left I'd give it a 6.5/10 not bad but could be improved!
8502140
He doesn't like his world. That is found out later.
8502116
Welp, that is why I try to release smaller chapters. 1500 is fine for me, and it prevent writers block by giving me a sooner break between chapters.
This was a cool Q&A chapter.
I’d demand some ear scritches. But that’s just me.