I really hope in the end everything is address it about tiem Twilight realized what she and the others have done to Spike. thou it may be too late, Celestia will be so diappointed in Twilight and herself for not seeing this sooner.
The text book definition of a creepy and suspenseful chapter. How Twilight try to put on a brave face, and the way Spike answer her was good. I hope that the main Six realized what they done to Spike before it to late. I don't want them to die, maybe hurt if that an option?. Good chapter keep it up.
This is genuinely scary. I don't know why but I that tragedy tag is starting to get in my mind. So Rainbow might either be dead or captured by whatever nightmare has Spike. Reminds me of that other story with Spike being invaded by the personification of nightmares.
It only occurs to me now that in the earliest chapter it seemed like Spike was becoming aware of the voice... but now, from the others perspecitve, it seems like he is oblivious to its influence. He seems to occasionally be normal Spike, even, and that just comes out randomly from creepy and aggressive Spike...
Maybe he's wrestling with it, trying to resist but also trying to act normal?
7864942 Oh, my! That certainly brings my spirits up. Having someone say they like my story even if they don't like the genre is indeed satisfying. I'm glad you liked it and thank you.
Man I can't even begin to guess where this is going. I love it! Keep up the good work. I hope to read the next chapter soonish. Perhaps before the year is over.
I really hope in the end everything is address it about tiem Twilight realized what she and the others have done to Spike.
thou it may be too late, Celestia will be so diappointed in Twilight and herself for not seeing this sooner.
The text book definition of a creepy and suspenseful chapter. How Twilight try to put on a brave face, and the way Spike answer her was good.
I hope that the main Six realized what they done to Spike before it to late. I don't want them to die, maybe hurt if that an option?.
Good chapter keep it up.
This is genuinely scary. I don't know why but I that tragedy tag is starting to get in my mind. So Rainbow might either be dead or captured by whatever nightmare has Spike. Reminds me of that other story with Spike being invaded by the personification of nightmares.
I'm on the edge of my seat, lets keep the ball rollin'!
It only occurs to me now that in the earliest chapter it seemed like Spike was becoming aware of the voice... but now, from the others perspecitve, it seems like he is oblivious to its influence. He seems to occasionally be normal Spike, even, and that just comes out randomly from creepy and aggressive Spike...
Maybe he's wrestling with it, trying to resist but also trying to act normal?
Or maybe he's half listening to it?
Loving the suspense. Spike makes for a very scary figure. And I love it!
This Spike is just the stuff of nightmares.
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I like your theories. Stay tuned to find out.
Creepy Spike
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Thanks, I try my best.
I don't usually read stories like this, but you sir can have a follow, favorite, and upvote. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Oh, my! That certainly brings my spirits up. Having someone say they like my story even if they don't like the genre is indeed satisfying. I'm glad you liked it and thank you.
Man I can't even begin to guess where this is going. I love it! Keep up the good work. I hope to read the next chapter soonish. Perhaps before the year is over.
Please! Please continue this story! I'm really excited to see where it goes. I love this type of stories!