What will you change the story name to?

7428057 Nothing as of yet. I might not even change it at all.
It's just that I'm not sure if I'm 100% happy with the current name.
If I do change it I'll say it in one of the chapters before I do change it so everybody is up to date.

Wait? Why didn't Rainbow have to pay for the chocolate? Was the old unicorn Twilight's Dad? Does he know about Rainbow and Twilight? Ugh! I both love and hate when there are so many questions like that yet to be answered xD

I'm gonna look the story through again and see if I can find any mistakes
Anyways, great chapter as always xD

I've marked the errors with caps :)
I'm not really gonna point out "," error because English is not my first language so i dont really know where they should be :)
Error:
Rainbow Dash still had her wings over her and she could hear the Pegasus slowly BREATH over her neck.
Fix:
Rainbow Dash still had her wings over her and she could hear the Pegasus slowly BREATHING over her neck.
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Error:
She slowly started breathing some air into Rainbow's neck. As she could hear Rainbow Dash groaning in slight annoyance AND she slowly opened her eyes.
Fix:
She slowly started breathing some air into Rainbow's neck. As she could hear Rainbow Dash groaning in slight annoyance AS she slowly opened her eyes.
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Error:
''You can sleep for a few more minutes but I got to prepare breakfast and wake Spike up,'' Twilight said with a giggle AND as she slowly pushed away the pegasus.
Fix:
Delete the "and" so its only:
''You can sleep for a few more minutes but I got to prepare breakfast and wake Spike up,'' Twilight said with a giggle AS she slowly pushed away the pegasus.
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Not sure if this is an error but anyways:
Twilight then pushed her covers away and got out of bed.
Isn't it supposed to be:
Twilight then pushed her covers away and got out of THE bed.
or
Twilight then pushed her covers away and got out of HER bed.
I am not really sure if this is an error or not but i am pointing it out anyways :) I don't want to miss an error :D
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Error:
''Well yesterday did go fine I'm still not sure how I feel about all this,''
Fix:
''Well yesterday did go fine BUT I'm still not sure how I feel about all this,''
Another Fix:
''Well EVEN THOUGH yesterday did go fine I'm still not sure how I feel about all this,''
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''Well apparently there has been some unrest between the GRIFFON KINGDOM and Equestria. Something about the trade between the two countries or something,''
Don't you mean "Griffonstone"? There isn't an actual Griffon kingdom in cannon. At least not as far as i can remember. But that's of course only an error if you want to stay to as much cannon things as possible while still having a lot of TwiDash :)
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Error:
''Twi you can open your eyes,'' Twilight opened her eyes only to see that ground far below her she had never been this high up her wings could not stand the pressure and they were flying really fast.
Fix:
''Twi you can open your eyes,'' Twilight opened her eyes only to see THE ground far below her. She had never been this high up BEFORE. Her wings could not stand the pressure and they were flying really fast.
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Error:
''Ready for what?''Twilight asked with a nervous tone.
Fix:
''Ready for what?" Twilight asked with a nervous tone.
You missed a space between what Twilight was saying and "Twilight asked with a nervous tone." :)
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Error:
The ground was nearing after about minute of falling and Twilight could feel her heart drop.
Fix:
The ground was nearing after about A minute of falling and Twilight could feel her heart drop.
You also place two spaces between "And" and "Twilight".
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Error:
''Something that I have bought for you'' Rainbow Dash replied with a smile as she handed the box over to Twilight WHICH then proceeded to tear apart the outer packing.
Fix:
''Something that I have bought for you'' Rainbow Dash replied with a smile as she handed the box over to Twilight WHO then proceeded to tear apart the outer packing.
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That was all the errors i could find
The story is really getting better :D
And also: "FINALLY A STORY WHERE THE WHOLE MAIN SIX IS POPULAR AND NOT JUST TWILIGHT BECAUSE SHE IS A PRINCESS xD"

''Well after reorganising part of the library I need to go to Canterlot for some Royal duties,''
Me: Royal duties huh? Well... That must be why her life is such a... Royal pain! (Sorry, i couldn't resist the puns )

7429416 Lol that pun Btw Rainbow didn't have to pay because you know she helped save Equestria like a billion times. And in the show, they never get anything for it so I thought I would do it differently. Again huge thanks for pointing out some of the mistakes I made! I'll fix them right away.

7429407 Also I think I'll keep the Griffen Kingdom since It's kinda strange that they would all come out of one pretty small town.

Btw, Congratulations on hitting your first goal

7429838 Thanks